tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942142568389593096.post2962550198419807614..comments2024-03-25T03:53:52.526-04:00Comments on Setu 🌉 सेतु: Dharmpal Mahendra Jain: Poetry (Western Voices 2021)Smart Indianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11400222466406727149noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942142568389593096.post-77977050847621978542021-03-09T15:17:59.807-05:002021-03-09T15:17:59.807-05:00Such great use of personification of nature. I was...Such great use of personification of nature. I was especially taken by these lines:<br /><br />and when I am there<br /><br />on your beach<br /><br />I can hold you<br /><br />in my folded hands.<br /><br />Made me go back and re-read all three, which was a good decision as each time I read your words I am taken somewhere else.raw poetry by donna snyderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06395778100606034963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6942142568389593096.post-74348313372687708862021-03-08T11:28:23.486-05:002021-03-08T11:28:23.486-05:00Such a descriptive text. The trees really come to ...Such a descriptive text. The trees really come to life-- the sea's sickness becomes natural and pure. Dustin Pickeringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02953204796324949247noreply@blogger.com