Abstract
The proposed endeavour focuses on the violence content
in Cassandra Clare’s City of Bones novel which is the first novel of her young
adult urban fantasy fiction series The Mortal Instruments. I used the corpus
linguistics and CDA. Then I used the framework of transitivity available in the
Systemic Functional Linguistics developed by M.A.K. Halliday to study who
affected whom and under what conditions. This proved a useful tool for
analyzing violence because of its inherent property of involving two participants,
the victim and dominant person, hence unequal power relations. Social
positioning becomes a potent factor in the occurrence of violence events.
Keywords: Violence, SFL, Transitivity, Corpus
Linguistics CDA, Power, Social Position.
Introduction
This research is the result of the
observation that contemporary fiction aimed at young adults presents a
disturbing amount of violence in its treatment of classic themes like good
versus evil, lust for power and dominance, revolt against the system and saving
the world from some deadly beast or demon etc.
Chris Crowe, an author and former president of ALAN (Assembly on
Literature for Adolescents), explores the question of appropriateness of
violence in his article “The Problem of Young Adult Literature” published in The
English Journal asserts that the
books are bad because they are not classics and they “corrupt the young” (46).
He cites Marianne Jennings, who said that books like The Pigman are
“trash that plants the destructive seeds of violence, theft, and sexual
perversion in the still malleable minds of children” (48).
Young adults or teenagers are 12 to 18 year age
groups. Although they are over with their childhood fantasies and are on the
road towards becoming mature individuals, they still carry an impressionable
and sensitive mind which is open to all sorts of influences. The individuals in
this age group are in precarious position as any wrong idea or deed done in
these formative years is believed to have lifelong impacts. Celebrity
psychologist Seema Hingoranny notes this is because a teenage mind is fashioned
differently. It is indeed one of the most unique and terrifying phases of
growing up. They get easily flustered with situations, people and themselves,
because they are trying to fit in a lot of things together. This is how many
succumb to dangerous and fatal online games like Blue Whale. Similarly reading
literature which directly targets them and have high content of violence can
have devastating results. Instead of having positive, nurturing and nourishing
effects and inculcating moral values and ethics, violent literature only
instigates evil instincts and appears to glorify violence as something cool and
acceptable.
The mainstay of the
present paper is that authors of YA fiction make use of excessive violence and
sensationalism in order to make their works riveting to adults readers apart
from targeted groups and this makes their works inappropriate for young readers
whose age group label these works carry. Exposure to so much bloodshed and
cruelty may make them insensitive to violence and they may develop violent
behavioural tendencies. The aim of research is to demonstrate the violence
content empirically in City of Bones
(2007) by Cassandra Clare and show how violence is related to power position
regardless of the good or evil side characters subscribe themselves with.
Further I will try to find out how violence correlates to the concept of social
identity. Thus I propose for a reduction in the violent and cruel content in
young adult literature.
The present research will
show the results achieved after investigating the presence of violence in City of Bones. I will explore whether
presence of violence can be empirically demonstrated by means of a corpus
linguistics analysis or not. The framework for the analysis is a combination of
I.
Corpus-based
approaches (Biber et al 1998, Scott 2001 and Stubbs 1996, 2002)
II.
Systemic
Functional Linguistics (Transitivity analysis) (Halliday 1994, Downing and
Locke 2006)
III.
Critical
discourse analysis (Fairclough, Van Dijk 1997, 2000, 2001. 2003, 2004,
Widdicome 1998 and Wodak and Meyer 2002, 2009)
The present paper might
provide a new insight into the violent content in City of Bones as well as into the possible effects it may have on
young adults.
In order to carry out a
study of violence, I will first separate those excerpts from the book which
contain high violent scenes and then label them according to the violence they
represent. Then I will study the process types that appear in the corpus in
order to find out who is inflicting violence upon who and then I will study the
participants and circumstances that are part of the corpus selected for the
analysis, City of Bones corpus. My intention here is to find out whether power
and violence are intrinsically related in them as “age and gender are easily
identifiable at first sight, but whether someone is or not classified as having
a violent nature is directly related to his/her actions” (Paoletti, 171).
In sum, my main objective will be to find
out the relationship between transitivity processes and socially-constructed
meaning related to power in the text. By doing this, I intend to shed some
light on the power relations between the characters in this text and how this
unbalanced relation creates a context for violence and what are the
consequences these power relations might have on the participants?
Young
Adult Fiction
Young Adult Fiction or YA
literature,
as defined by Beach and Marshall, is “literature written for and
marketed
to young adults.” Other characteristics include (but are not limited to) the
following: a teenage (or young adult) protagonist, first person perspective,
adult characters in the background, a limited number of characters, a
compressed time span and familiar setting, current slang, detailed descriptions
of appearance and dress, positive resolution, few subplots, and an approximate
length of 125 to 250 pages (Beach and Marshall, 1991).
Sales
of YA novels have exploded in recent years.
The term "young
adult" was coined by the Young Adult Library Services Association during
the 1960s to represent the 12-18 age range. Novels of the time, like S. E.
Hinton's The Outsiders, and Cormier's
The Chocolate War offered a mature contemporary
realism directed at adolescents. The focus on culture and serious themes in
young adult paved the way for authors to write with more candour about teen
issues in the 1970s.
J.K. Rowling's well-timed
Harry Potter series exploded the
category and inspired a whole generation of fantasy series novelists. The shift
led to success for Stephenie Meyer's Twilight
vampire saga and Suzanne Collins' futuristic The Hunger Games. Now, reveling in the continued success of fantasy
subgenres and series, young adult fiction is enjoying a sustained boom rather
than an afterglow. The common themes are love, good versus evil, adventure,
social issues like rape, suicide and bullying etc.
Violence
Violence is
universally condemned yet to be found everywhere and YA novels could not remain
untouched and in fact make lavish use of violence in the depiction of the above
mentioned themes. The World Health Organisation defines
violence in World Report on Violence and Health as “[t]he intentional
use of physical force or power, threatened or actual, against oneself, another
person, or against a group or community, that either results in or has a high
likelihood of resulting in injury, death, psychological harm, mal development
or deprivation” (Krug et al. 5).
In their World Report on Violence and
Health, Krug et al. (6) attempt to provide a more useful taxonomy of
violence; they divide violence into three categories, depending on the “characteristics
of those committing the violent act” (Krug et al. 6). The first is self-directed
violence, such as suicidal behavior or self-mutilation. The second is interpersonal
violence, divided into family and intimate partner violence as well as
community violence. Terrorist acts, war or attacks for economic reasons are
subsumed under the term collective violence (see Krug et al. 6).
According to Indian Penal
Code’s chapters XVI and XVII, sections 299 to 377 and 378 to 462, following
types constitute violence and I will use this table for present study:
Violence Category
|
Definition
|
Abuse/Assault/
|
To hurt by mistreating, physical attack
involving actual body contact
|
Child abuse/ Child Abandonment
|
Mistreatment of children, leaving a
child as a rejection of one’s responsibility towards the child
|
Domestic/ Gender Violence/ Rape
|
Acts of violence against a family member
Acts of violence from male to female
The unlawful compelling through physical
force or duress to have sexual intercourse
|
Injury
|
Physical harm or damage to a person
|
Kidnapping
|
Taking away a person without his consent
|
Murder
|
The killing of human being
|
Murder Attempt
|
Unsuccessful attempt to kill a person
|
Robbery/Snatching
|
Act of taking something other’s property
by physical violence or by duress
|
Threat
|
Act of verbally assaulting/ duress to
make somebody do something against their wishes
|
Table 1:
categorization of violence
Violence, language and power
My objective in this section is to discuss
the relationship between language, social power and violence. If we accept that
language constructs a reality, then we can acknowledge that language can create
a favourable context in such a way that the actions taking place within it can
be suitably manipulated. Therefore, language can be a contributor to an
enactment of, for instance, discourses related to: gender equalities and
inequalities; struggles for and against racism and the fostering of peace or
violence within our society. Thus, violent acts can reflect a violent society
because, as O‘Connor (1995,309) signals, “when the words of violence are spoken
by others and by ourselves, we may well be advancing acts of violence.”
According to Thomas at al. (2004,11), “language
is the arena where the concepts of right [...] and duty are created, and thus
language actually creates power, as well as being a site where power is
performed.” Power is defined by Horno (2005,23) as the ability “to affect one‘s
own or another person‘s development, a capacity which can be used positively or
negatively […].” Investigating the discourse of
violence related to power entails investigating the relationship between the two main characters involved in
this relationship: the victim and the
perpetrator. The victim is understood in terms of weakness, passivity and
suffering, in other words, having a lack of power. In turn, the perpetrator is
the person who has the power not solely because he or she holds a higher
status.
The relationship between language, power
and violence, in my view, can be extrapolated to the world of City of Bones. In fact, that is the core
of the present chapter. As demonstrated, there is a discourse of violence
within the text, my aim then is to investigate whether the relationship between
perpetrators and victims in the text is based on the presence or lack of social
power and the use that perpetrators make of it in order to commit violent acts
against their victims. If this is so, then one of the messages that these tales
are sending to children is that one might take an advantage of a predominant
power position –either related to social status or solely to a better position of strength- to make use of violence
so as to achieve any aim or solely for revenge. As in the City of Bones, Valentine sends raveners and other people, he has
converted into demons, to kill his own wife and daughter. Lord of devils,
Abbadon, attacks Jace and Clary and demands for the mortal cup and when Clary
refuses to give him the cup, he attacks everybody viciously to kill them.
Another example is Hodge. He uses his hawk to attack Clary and snatches cup
from her hand.
The next part of the Introduction deals
with the brief review of theoretical framework of the project i.e. Corpus
Linguistics (CL), Critical Discourse Analysis (CDA), and the analysis of transitivity
as proposed in Systemic Functional Linguistic (SFL). The combination of these
three approaches, might, in my opinion, contribute to clarify the relationship
between social identity and power that seems to be present between the
characters in the text.
Corpus linguistics has been described by
Stubbs (2002, 20) as “a method in which observational data from large texts
collections are used as the main evidence for the uses and meanings of words
and phrases”. McCarthy (1999, 1) claims, computational analysis has become, in
the last decades, a remarkable assistant at the time of studying texts. Corpus
linguistics is based, according to Stubbs (2002, 220-221) on two principles. The
first is that data and analysis must be independent and the second is that
repeated events are significant. Regarding the main characteristics of Corpus
linguistics, Biber (1998,4) explains that the main characteristics of this kind
of approach are: (i) it is empirical, that is, according to Baker et al (2008,277)
“they (CL methods) enable the researcher to approach the texts (or text
surface) (relatively) free from any preconceived or existing notions regarding
their linguistic or semantic/pragmatic content”; (ii) it uses a corpus as a
base of analysis; (iii) it makes extensive use of computers for analysis and
(iv) it depends on quantitative and qualitative analytical techniques. For the
present project I make use of Word Smith tools 7 developed by M. Scott
(2010). As he explains, these are composed of different tools for different
tasks like wordlist, concord and keywords (2001, 47). In short, Corpus
linguistics methodologies provide good support for a study of meaning in
discourse. I agree with Widdowson (2000, 6-9) that “Corpus analysis reveals
textual facts, fascinating profiles of produced language, and its concordances
are always springing surprises.”
Fairclough (1993) defines CDA as discourse analysis
which aims to explore often opaque relationships of causality and determination
between (a) discursive practices, events and texts, and (b) wider social and
cultural structures, relations and processes; to investigate how such
practices, events and texts arise out of and are ideologically shaped by
relations of power and struggles over power; and to explore how the opacity of
these relationships between discourse and society is itself a factor securing
power and hegemony. According to Van Dijk (1998a) Critical Discourse Analysis
is a field that is concerned with studying and analyzing written and spoken
texts to reveal the discursive sources of power, dominance, inequality and
bias. It examines how these discursive sources are maintained and reproduced
within specific social, political and historical contexts.
The systemic functional linguistics
approach to discourse analysis is based on the model of “language as a social semiotic”
outlined in the works of Halliday. Language is used functionally, what is said
depends on what one needs to accomplish. In Halliday’s theory, language
expresses three main kinds of meanings simultaneously: ideational, interpersonal,
and textual meanings (1985). Among them, the ideational meaning
(the clause as representation) serves for the expression of “content” in
language, that is, our experience of the real world, including the experience
of our inner world. When we use language we often use it to speak of something
or someone doing something. That is why the ideational meaning can be
referred to as experiential meaning coming from the clause as representation. The
interpersonal function helps us
to participate in communicative acts. The textual meaning creates
links between features of the text with elements in the context of situation;
it refers to the manner in which a text is organized. Transitivity is a part of
Ideational function. In his An Introduction to Functional Grammar,
Halliday identifies transitivity as follows:
A fundamental property of language is that it enables human beings to
build a mental
picture of reality, to make sense of their experience of what goes on
around them and
inside them. …Our most powerful
conception of reality is that it consists of “goings- on”:
of doing, happening, feeling, being. These goings-on are sorted out in the
semantic system
of language, and expressed through the grammar of the clause… This… is
the system of
TRANSITIVITY. Transitivity specifies the different types of processes
that are recognised
in the language and the structures by which they are expressed (1985, 101).
There are six processes in transitivity:
Material process
|
Process of doing, acting
|
Actor, goal, range
|
Jump, Catch, hit etc.
|
Mental process
|
Process of feeling, thinking and
perceiving
|
Sensor, phenomenon
|
Think, know
|
Relational process
|
Process of being and having
|
Carrier, attribute
|
Is, has
|
Verbal process
|
Process of saying
|
Sayer, receiver
|
Say, tell, answer
|
Behavioural process
|
Process of physiological and
psychological behavior
|
Behaver
|
Laugh, breathe
|
Existential process
|
Process of existing
|
There
|
There was a cat on the road
|
Table 2 : Transitivity processes
The
concept of Identity
The concept of identity is related to our
daily lives as Pay├б (2009,10) explains, there are a lot of fields in which the
term ‘identity’ could come to our minds if a survey were to be carried out in
the streets: nationality, social class, religion, profession, gender,
personality, to mention just a few. Tajfel (1974,69) defines social identity as
that part of an individual’s self-concept which derives from his knowledge of
his membership of a social group (or groups) together with the emotional
significance attached to that membership. For Antaki and Widdicombe (1998,2)
identity is “a person‘s display of, or ascription to, membership of some
feature-rich category”. Widdicombe (1998,52) notes that identity means an affiliation to a category
based on the actions, beliefs and opinions of a person. What is clear is that
participants in all processes assume identities as they get enrolled in different
social activities (Gregori 2000). In fact, participants may adopt different
multiple identities, sometimes simultaneously, and these may change even within
a change in their social status or when immersed in different types of status
interaction, and according to different participants ( Gregori 2000 ).
For the aim of the present study, I will
be focusing on the social information related to individual identity
transmitted by transitivity involved in The Corpus. Furthermore, it is my
intention ―to show that and how this identity is made relevant or
ascribed to self or others, as Widdicombe (1998, 191) suggests.
This part summarized briefly the concepts
of YA, Violence. Also CDA, CL ,Transitivity and Identity that I will be using
as a theoretical framework for the analysis of the text and hence will be able to
put forward the results as I believe that the combination of these methods can
be an effective tool for identifying violent content, its analysis and then for
producing reliable results.
Research Hypothesis and Methodology
Hypothesis: to show that for
marketing and wide readership, YA fiction writers make use of excessive
violence and sensationalism in order to make their works riveting to adults
readers apart from targeted groups and this makes their works inappropriate for
young readers whose age group label these works carry by using CDA, corpus
analysis and transitivity analysis.
My hypothesis is based on what Nodelman
(2005:10) calls as ‘the children‘s lack of experience’ which I agree with. In
my view, this lack lays the responsibility on our shoulders of protecting them
from “experiences they may not yet understand well enough to cope with” and of
educating them “into the sort of understanding that will enable them to look
after themselves” (Nodelman 2005, 100).
My hypothesis is also based on the
consideration of young adults as a group, not individually, and some
assumptions though based on children are readily applicable to teenagers as
well need to be taken into account:
§ Children
have limited understanding and short attention spans. [...]At any given stage, a child is capable of understanding
only a certain amount.
§ Children
are emotionally vulnerable, easily upset, and often permanently damaged by
exposure to ugly painful matters. They respond to depictions of evil or
deprivation not by becoming evil but by having nightmares, or even by
developing permanent neuroses.
§ [...].
Exposing children to evil or violence in books merely encourages their most
basic, most unfortunate, and most uncontrollable tendencies.
§ [...].
They are pliable and, therefore, highly suggestible, and they are prone to
dangerous experimentation. They respond to depictions of violence by becoming
violent themselves. [...]. Children will become whatever they read about.
(Nodelman 2003:87)
Put it simply, the use of violence not
solely regarding the vocabulary, but also the processes carried out in the City of Bones, such as "Girl," it hissed. "Flesh.
Blood. To eat, oh, to eat has experiential value in terms of a
violent representation of some participants in the text. Hence, in my view,
there is a question to be answered about the text, namely, what types of
processes and participants prevail?
Methodology
I selected 20 excerpts are from the novel, label them according to the
violence they represent and then did an intuitive analysis of these excerpts.
Using the Wordsmith tools 7
software’s wordlist function, I got the frequency of all the words used in the
corpus. Then I search for the concordance lines of words directly related to
violence and have high frequency of occurrence in the wordlist by using the
concord function. I closely analysed the context and role of these words in the
violence depiction in the novel. After this I studied the transitivity patterns
in the corpus. Further I isolated those processes which displayed violent
content to study participants. This assisted me in categorizing the
participants under different identities they share according to their position
to inflict violence on others.
Results
and Discussion
This part of the paper will discuss the
results I achieved after computational and transitivity analysis of the
selected excerpts. I selected 20 excerpts according to the criteria I discussed
in the previous chapter. This part is divided into four parts. First part will
be an intuitive analysis and presents classification of excerpts according to
violence type. Second part will be an analysis of frequencies of words directly
related to violence. Then I provide the results of transitivity analysis to see
who has the power to inflict violence and this leads me to last part, i.e.
identity analysis.
Intuitive
Analysis
I believe that an intuitive analysis of
some of the selected excerpts which compose my corpus will settle the base for
my computational corpus investigation because, as Biber (1998, 10) argues:
“intuition and anecdotal evidence can also lead to interesting corpus based
investigations [...]”. This starting point is, in my view, essential in order
to establish a first approach to my main hypothesis: that is, that the fiction
aimed at young adults has got a higher content of violence and cruelty than
that which, in my opinion, should be found in texts aimed at them. The present
study seeks to provide a quantitative and qualitative account of the presence
of violence with the intention of encouraging a linguistic and social
intervention in the content of the YA fiction with the purpose of decreasing
the content of both violent language and violent acts. Below, I present the
results of the intuitive analysis of some excerpts. This analysis was crucial
to determine whether it was worth applying a quantitative analysis of the whole
corpus.
City
of Bones presents a violent and disturbing story about a young
girl, named Clary, who happens to be the daughter of a barbaric and relentless
evil person. Her mother did everything to protect her and keep her safe from
the underworld demons. She never tells Clary herself that she is a shadowhunter
herself. After surviving murder attempts and other cruel acts, Clary comes to
know the truth about herself and her family. Through this journey of self
realization, she gets hurt physically, mentally and emotionally.
The beginning of the novel acts as a
signpost for the violent content young readers have to deal with in the
following chapters. We read a murder enacted in a lively club by a group of
shadowhunters. As Isabelle, a shadowhunter girl, hits the boy with her whip and
he writhes in pain, she laughs loudly and then Jace kills the boy:
Excerpt 4
He sank the
knife into the blue-haired boy's chest. Blackish liquid exploded around the
hilt. The
boy arched off the floor, gurgling and twisting. With a grimace Jace stood up.
His black
shirt was blacker now in some places, wet with blood. He looked down at the
twitching
form at his feet, reached down, and yanked out the knife. (MURDER)
Clary, a normal teenage girl watches the
whole scene, feels utterly disgusted, starts screaming and but as other people
cannot see shadowhunters, she is unable to say anything definitive about the
murderers. Two days later her mother gets attacked by demons and they take her
away. Clary reaches home and found herself face to face with a demon. He
launches himself with full force on Clary. Clary only manages to hit it with a
photograph but this has no effect the demon:
Excerpt 5
The
photograph hit its midsection and bounced off, striking the floor with the
sound of
shattering
glass. The creature didn't seem to notice. It came on toward her, broken glass
splintering
under its feet. "Bones, to crunch, to suck out the marrow, to drink the
veins..."
Clary's back hit the wall. She
could back up no farther. (MURDER ATTEMPT)
Clary
inadvertently puts the sensor she snatched from Jace into demon’s open mouth
and sensor explodes burning the demon completely. But before dying it hits
Clary head with its claws and she goes unconscious. As she wakes up after three
days, another shock awaits her. She calls Luke, her mother’s boyfriend for help
but he turns out to be a stone heated fellow:
Excerpt 6
"Look." His voice was
hard. "Whatever your mother's gotten herself mixed up in, it's
nothing to do with me. You're better off
where you are." "But I don't want to stay here."
She heard the
whine in her voice, like a child's. "I don't know these people. You-"
"I'm Not
your father,
Clary. I've told you that before." Tears burned the backs of her eyes.
"I'm
sorry. It's just-" "Don't call me for
favors again," he said. "I've got my own problems, I
don't need to
be bothered with yours," he added, and hung up the phone.
(HELP
REFUSAL AND CHILD ABANDONMENT)
Clary feels
forsaken but yet another blow awaits her and this time she comes to know that
her own mother has put a memory block on her mind so that she should not
remember her connection with shadowhunt world. Clary undergoes immense
emotional pain at this moment and feels like she is betrayed by her own mother.
Surviving another attempt of murder from vampires this time, she tries to hone
her talent of learning magic runes and very effectively learns and applies
them. She also learns another fact that she has the power to get things that
are hidden in paintings.
Valentine,
the self-proclaimed evil lord and unfortunately the father of Clary, is on the
rise and he is after the mortal cup which Clary knows that is hidden in a
painted tarot card. She gets the cup and here we have one of the most violent
and barbaric scene when king of demons, Abbadon, attacks her and others and
seriously injures Alec under the orders of Valentine:
Excerpt 18
The demon leaped at him. Jace
whipped his blades up and outward with an almost
frightening
speed; both sank into the fleshiest part of the demon, its abdomen. It
howled
and
struck at him, knocking him aside the way a cat might bat aside a kitten. Jace
rolled and
got to
his feet, but Clary could see from the way he was holding his arm that he'd
been hurt.
(INJURY)
And also
With a snarl it struck again, bone-talons
catching Alec a vicious blow that lifted him off his
feet and hurled him against the far wall.
He struck with a sickening crunch and slid to the
floor. Isabelle screamed her brother's name.
He didn't move. Lowering the whip, she started
to run
to him. The demon, turning, caught her a backhanded blow that sent her spinning
to
the ground.
Coughing blood, Isabelle started to get to her feet; Abbadon knocked her down
again, and
this time she lay still. (MURDER ATTEMPT)
Demon
feels pleased with his actions and threatens Clary and her shadowhunter friends
that he will take pleasure in killing them and hearing their bones crunch under
his weight. Alec stays unconscious for
many days. After other attacks, betrayals leading to much of turmoil and
shocking revelations, Valentine is able to take the Mortal cup and uses his
power to vanish before anyone can get hold of him.
To
conclude so much violence and blood flow clearly shows the high violent content
in the novel and in my opinion, is unsuitable for young readers whose sensitive
minds are open to all kinds of influences without much filtering good from bad
because in novel even those who are shown on the side of good are equal
participants in violent acts, in fact they inflict pain on others as something
acceptable or standard of coolness.
After this intuitive analysis, I can
confirm that, in my opinion, the rest of City of Bones Corpus may contain a
high content of gratuitous violence; thus, a more accurate study by means of a
quantitatively computational analysis based on corpus linguistics combined with
a qualitative interpretation of other violent acts may help test my hypothesis.
5.1.2
Classification of excerpts
The following table details the
classification of violent excerpts according to the violence they present:
Violence Category
|
Frequency of occurrence
|
Abuse/Assault/
|
5
(excerpts 1,2,3,14,20)
|
Child abuse/ Child Abandonment
|
1
(excerpt 6)
|
Domestic/ Gender Violence/ Rape
|
1 (excerpt 17)
|
Injury
|
4
(excerpts 11, 12, 15, 18)
|
Kidnapping
|
--
|
Murder
|
5
(excerpts 4, 5, 9, 10, 16)
|
Murder Attempt
|
3
(excerpts 7, 8, 19)
|
Robbery/Snatching
|
--
|
Threat
|
1 (excerpt 13)
|
Table 3:
Categorization of violence in City
of Bones
As we can observe the suitability of
excerpts into one of the violence category means that it is not only intuition
but facts that prove the presence of a context of violence in the City of Bones.
5.2.
Frequency Analysis
This section is devoted to explaining how
the computational analysis of frequencies of the lexical units in The Corpus
was carried out. I fulfilled a computational analysis of the frequencies of the
lexical units in The Corpus. I selected WordSmith 7 (Scott 2018) in
order to implement this stage of the present study because it can provide me with all the tools which, in
my opinion, can help to go through all the stages which I intend to in order to
achieve my final target.
By using the application “wordlist” I get
the number of words that made my corpus and also their statistics that is shown
in the following table:
Table 4: The statistics of the City of Bones
corpus
The file size means the number of
characters that can be found in the corpus. Here we have 14,620 characters. The
total running words (tokens) in the text are 2,604. The number of distinct
words is 820 and word ratio is 31.49. Vargas (2008, 9) explains that the higher
the type/token ratio is, the more distinct words will be found in the text. On
the other hand, a low ratio will be evidence for a high number of repetitions.
This corpus contains 31.49 ratio which means Corpus is broad in terms of
vocabulary hence we are facing a corpus with a high specialization rate. In
other words, the topics in this corpus might not be repeated or frequently
repeated.
The
words which have high frequency and also the words which are related to
violence are given in the table below that make up the 20 excerpts I chose for
my analysis:
THE
|
163
|
6.26
|
TEETH
|
8
|
0.31
|
ACROSS
|
4
|
0.15
|
AND
|
74
|
2.84
|
THERE
|
8
|
0.31
|
AIR
|
4
|
0.15
|
TO
|
69
|
2.65
|
AGAINST
|
7
|
0.27
|
ALEC
|
4
|
0.15
|
HER
|
65
|
2.50
|
BOY
|
7
|
0.27
|
ALMOST
|
4
|
0.15
|
A
|
53
|
2.04
|
CHEST
|
7
|
0.27
|
ARM
|
4
|
0.15
|
IT
|
44
|
1.69
|
EYES
|
7
|
0.27
|
BE
|
4
|
0.15
|
HIS
|
43
|
1.65
|
FACE
|
7
|
0.27
|
BLADES
|
4
|
0.15
|
HE
|
42
|
1.61
|
FELL
|
7
|
0.27
|
BROUGHT
|
4
|
0.15
|
OF
|
42
|
1.61
|
HAIRED
|
7
|
0.27
|
BY
|
4
|
0.15
|
SHE
|
41
|
1.57
|
HEAD
|
7
|
0.27
|
CAME
|
4
|
0.15
|
JACE
|
40
|
1.54
|
OFF
|
7
|
0.27
|
CLAWS
|
4
|
0.15
|
HIM
|
30
|
1.15
|
ROLLED
|
7
|
0.27
|
DEEP
|
4
|
0.15
|
WAS
|
30
|
1.15
|
STAGGERED
|
7
|
0.27
|
EAT
|
4
|
0.15
|
AT
|
28
|
1.08
|
STRUCK
|
7
|
0.27
|
FELT
|
4
|
0.15
|
IN
|
28
|
1.08
|
THROAT
|
7
|
0.27
|
FORWARD
|
4
|
0.15
|
WITH
|
28
|
1.08
|
AN
|
6
|
0.23
|
HARD
|
4
|
0.15
|
ITS
|
26
|
1.00
|
COULD
|
6
|
0.23
|
HE'D
|
4
|
0.15
|
AS
|
24
|
0.92
|
DON'T
|
6
|
0.23
|
HILT
|
4
|
0.15
|
THAT
|
20
|
0.77
|
FLUNG
|
6
|
0.23
|
HIT
|
4
|
0.15
|
OUT
|
18
|
0.69
|
GO
|
6
|
0.23
|
HOT
|
4
|
0.15
|
BACK
|
17
|
0.65
|
HANDS
|
6
|
0.23
|
I'M
|
4
|
0.15
|
BUT
|
17
|
0.65
|
IF
|
6
|
0.23
|
JAWS
|
4
|
0.15
|
HAND
|
17
|
0.65
|
ISABELLE
|
6
|
0.23
|
LET
|
4
|
0.15
|
CLARY
|
15
|
0.58
|
JUST
|
6
|
0.23
|
MOUTH
|
4
|
0.15
|
FROM
|
15
|
0.58
|
KNIFE
|
6
|
0.23
|
NEVER
|
4
|
0.15
|
INTO
|
14
|
0.54
|
RAPHAEL'S
|
6
|
0.23
|
RAISED
|
4
|
0.15
|
DOWN
|
13
|
0.50
|
SENSOR
|
6
|
0.23
|
SAW
|
4
|
0.15
|
FOR
|
13
|
0.50
|
THING
|
6
|
0.23
|
SCREAMED
|
4
|
0.15
|
YOU
|
13
|
0.50
|
WALL
|
6
|
0.23
|
SEE
|
4
|
0.15
|
BLADE
|
12
|
0.46
|
WHIP
|
6
|
0.23
|
SERAPH
|
4
|
0.15
|
BLOOD
|
12
|
0.46
|
YOUR
|
6
|
0.23
|
SOMETHING
|
4
|
0.15
|
DEMON
|
12
|
0.46
|
ABBADON
|
5
|
0.19
|
STARTED
|
4
|
0.15
|
I
|
12
|
0.46
|
AROUND
|
5
|
0.19
|
THEM
|
4
|
0.15
|
ON
|
12
|
0.46
|
ASIDE
|
5
|
0.19
|
TOO
|
4
|
0.15
|
BLACK
|
11
|
0.42
|
CLARY'S
|
5
|
0.19
|
AWAY
|
3
|
0.12
|
RAPHAEL
|
11
|
0.42
|
ENOUGH
|
5
|
0.19
|
BACKWARD
|
3
|
0.12
|
AGAIN
|
10
|
0.38
|
FREE
|
5
|
0.19
|
BEFORE
|
3
|
0.12
|
FEET
|
10
|
0.38
|
GROUND
|
5
|
0.19
|
BEGAN
|
3
|
0.12
|
FLOOR
|
10
|
0.38
|
HERSELF
|
5
|
0.19
|
BEHIND
|
3
|
0.12
|
HAD
|
10
|
0.38
|
HIMSELF
|
5
|
0.19
|
BLOW
|
3
|
0.12
|
SAID
|
9
|
0.35
|
JACE'S
|
5
|
0.19
|
BODY
|
3
|
0.12
|
TOWARD
|
9
|
0.35
|
KILL
|
5
|
0.19
|
BOY'S
|
3
|
0.12
|
UP
|
9
|
0.35
|
KNOCKING
|
5
|
0.19
|
CAUGHT
|
3
|
0.12
|
WERE
|
9
|
0.35
|
NOT
|
5
|
0.19
|
CRUNCH
|
3
|
0.12
|
BETWEEN
|
8
|
0.31
|
NOW
|
5
|
0.19
|
DIDN'T
|
3
|
0.12
|
BLUE
|
8
|
0.31
|
SKIN
|
5
|
0.19
|
DOOR
|
3
|
0.12
|
CREATURE
|
8
|
0.31
|
THEN
|
5
|
0.19
|
FLUID
|
3
|
0.12
|
LIKE
|
8
|
0.31
|
THROUGH
|
5
|
0.19
|
FORCE
|
3
|
0.12
|
OVER
|
8
|
0.31
|
GLEAMING
|
3
|
0.12
|
GOT
|
3
|
0.12
|
HEARD
|
3
|
0.12
|
HEAVILY
|
3
|
0.12
|
HEAVY
|
3
|
0.12
|
HISSED
|
3
|
0.12
|
HUNG
|
3
|
0.12
|
ITSELF
|
3
|
0.12
|
KNOW
|
3
|
0.12
|
LASHED
|
3
|
0.12
|
LOOKED
|
3
|
0.12
|
LUNGED
|
3
|
0.12
|
MARBLE
|
3
|
0.12
|
ME
|
3
|
0.12
|
MY
|
3
|
0.12
|
NEARLY
|
3
|
0.12
|
NEXT
|
3
|
0.12
|
NO
|
3
|
0.12
|
ONE
|
3
|
0.12
|
ONTO
|
3
|
0.12
|
OR
|
3
|
0.12
|
QUICK
|
3
|
0.12
|
REACHED
|
3
|
0.12
|
RIGHT
|
3
|
0.12
|
SEEMED
|
3
|
0.12
|
SEIZED
|
3
|
0.12
|
SHIRT
|
3
|
0.12
|
SHOULDER
|
3
|
0.12
|
SHOULDERS
|
3
|
0.12
|
SIDE
|
3
|
0.12
|
SLOWLY
|
3
|
0.12
|
SOME
|
3
|
0.12
|
STOOD
|
3
|
0.12
|
STRIKING
|
3
|
0.12
|
THREW
|
3
|
0.12
|
TORE
|
3
|
0.12
|
UNDER
|
3
|
0.12
|
VALENTINE
|
3
|
0.12
|
WANT
|
3
|
0.12
|
WHO
|
3
|
0.12
|
WILL
|
3
|
0.12
|
Table 5 :
Top Frequency list in the City of Bones Corpus.
Among the
lexical words in the frequency list, some of the words stand out as
particularly interesting regarding violence. At first sight, the words blood, caught+seized,
kill+killed+killing, and hit with other words used to convey same
meaning like struck, striking, knocked,
slammed stand out from rest of the corpus as these are directly related to
violence and have high frequency. For this reason, I decided to carry out a
study of their concordances.
5.3. Concordances
This
section details the concordance lists of some words that hint violent content
in the corpus. I made use of concord
program of wordsmith tools 7. First I
will list the concordance tables and then I will closely analyse these.
Table 6:
Concordance list of blood
Table 7:
concordance lines of seized and caught
Table 8: concordance lines of Kill, Killed and killing
Table 9: Concordance lines of hit, struck and striking
As these tables clearly show that word blood (12), hit+strike+struck (14) and kill+killed+killing (9) and
seized+caught (6) are words that clearly present a scenario of violent with
other words like threw, flung or slammed providing the context of violence.
A notable feature of the concordance of
word blood is that none of the blood
is the result of any inadvertent cutting or self injury but a result of other
person’s assault or murder attempts. This further hints at the use of the word
as a conscious choice to depict violent nature of the characters involved. A
distinction has been made between the colour of the blood of demons and other
persons. Their blood is represented as black in colour but other characters
when get injured or murdered have red blood.
However this difference does not help to mitigate the effects of
violence as regardless of colour, blood flow always presents a horrible sight.
For example excerpt 9:
"Don't
watch," he said, going to stand over the scarred thing's body. He raised
the
blade
over his head and brought it down. Blood fountained from the giant's throat,
splattering
Jace's boots. (MURDER)
The use of word seize marks the violent nature of different characters as the very
meaning of the word conveys i.e. taking something from some person by force or
against the wishes of the person involved. Though it can be noticed that the
word seize does not always means an
attack but sometimes it is also a way of defence as in the scene when Clary
gets attacked by a forsaken, she seized a photograph to hit the demon.
Similarly Jace seized the knife and sank it in the heart of Raphael to prevent
him from attacking Clary.
Hit,
struck and striking
words are used for attack purpose only. There is not a single instance where
these words do not have negative or violent connotations. Another word that has
used with same meaning as hit is shove.
Following excerpt perhaps best summarises the discourse of violence in the
novel:
Excerpt 17
Alec moved, blindingly fast. A sharp
crack resounded through her head. He had shoved her
against the
wall so hard that the back of her skull had struck the wood paneling. His face
was
inches from
hers, eyes huge and black. "Don't you ever," he whispered, mouth a
blanched
line,
"ever, say anything like that to him or I'll kill you. I swear on the
Angel, I'll kill you."
(GENDER
VIOLENCE)
Therefore I find all these striking
examples more adequate in my opinion for adult readers than for teens due to
their graphic violent content.
Transitivity
Analysis
This
stage of my research is devoted to showing the results achieved when analysing
the process types and the participants found in The Corpus so as to arrive at a
more detailed account of the processes by which all the characters involved are
described. The reason for this study is that it is my intention to investigate
the relationship between linguistic structures and socially constructed meaning
in The Corpus as Burton remarks, “stylistics analysis is not just a question of
discussing ‘effects’ in language and text, but a powerful method for
understanding the ways in which all sorts of ‘realities’ are constructed
through language” (Burton, 201). Hence, I have carried out a study of verbal
processes according to Halliday‘s (1994) systemic framework, namely,
transitivity system, because it entails revealing not only the type of verbal
processes but the meaning, participants and circumstances surrounding them.
Therefore, by doing this, I might be able to glean enough information, if
indeed this is possible, about how social power or, put more simply, unequal
power relationships, are related to violence. This is the case because since
human beings are able to put our experiences and thoughts into either oral or
written stories (what is called narratives), transitivity analysis is applied
to search what processes are experienced in a text and to uncover its main
linguistic features. Besides, taking into account that transitivity is related
to the ideational function and this function is concerned with the transmission
of ideas, then, with this
analysis, I will be able to show the ideas that were and still are transmitted
to children.
I was able to track 375 processes in 20
excerpts (Appendixes 1 and 2). Following table presents the division of process
types:
Process type
|
Frequency of occurrence
|
Material
|
243
|
Mental
|
44
|
Verbal
|
29
|
Relational
|
42
|
Behavioural
|
21
|
Existential
|
5
|
Total
|
375
|
Table 10: Processes in the corpus
The statistical analysis clearly shows
that from 375 processes found, material processes dominate the city of bones
corpus. That is to say, processes of doing and causing. Some examples of
material processes are displayed in the following table:
1
|
She moved with a lightning speed
|
Move
|
34
|
The blue-haired boy slashed at Jace with
claws extended
|
Slash
|
43
|
He sank he knife into the blue-haired
boy’s chest
|
sink
|
Table 11 : Material processes
Mental processes i.e. processes belonging
to the world of inner consciousness involving processes of cognition,
understanding and sensing etc. are second in number but far less than material
processes. The differences between these two process types indicate that the
characters in the novel are more concerned with action i.e. doing thing rather
than reflecting on how things should be done or what will be the consequences
of doing certain things. Another interesting fact is that Clary is sensor in
majority of mental processes which may be because before entering the
shadowhunt world, she was a normal teenage girl interested in drawing. So as
she enters the magical world, her human traits and emotions are still dominate
part of her personality and especially the habit of reflecting on things.
Following table provides some examples of mental processes:
83
|
To her horror, Clary realized that the
noises it was making were words
|
Realize
|
131
|
She had almost forgotten the sensor
|
Forget
|
142
|
I’m next, she thought, panicked
|
Think
|
Table 12 : Mental processes
Next to mental processes are relational
processes in the frequency of occurrence. I found 42 instances of relational
processes in the corpus. These processes relate a participant to its identity
or description. They are different from material processes because one
participant does not affect other participant. Some examples from the corpus
are:
48
|
His black shirt was blacker now in some
places, wet with blood
|
Was
|
74
|
But the thing was too fast for her
|
Was
|
187
|
For a moment the giant stood swaying
|
Stood
|
Table 13: Relational processes
I found verbal processes to be fourth in
occurrence frequency with 29 samples. These are the processes of saying and
existing on the borderline between mental and relational processes. Halliday
notes that this kind of processes express the relationship between ideas
constructed in human consciousness and the ideas enacted in the form of
language (1994, 107). Following are examples from the corpus analysed:
54
|
Between his teeth, he hissed, “so it be,
the forsaken will take you all”
|
Hiss
|
165
|
“Don’t call me for favours again”, he
said
|
Say
|
299
|
“Seize the trespassers’” he said
|
say
|
Table 14: Verbal processes
Behavioural processes are notably
difficult to differentiate because these processes are related to physiological
and psychological behavior. They stand between material and mental processes.
In order to recognize these processes I relied on two aspects- one that it has
single participant (i.e. intransitive verb in traditional grammar) and second
that when both physical and mental features of an action are inseparable.
Following table shows some examples:
18
|
She laughed standing over him
|
Laugh
|
274
|
She relaxed momentarily and then tensed
again
|
Relax
|
297
|
His lips curled back from his pointed
incisors
|
Curl
|
Table 15 : Behavioural processes
Finally, Existential processes i.e.,
processes of existence, had an occurrence of only 5 lines. This process type is
easiest to catagorise because the word there
is necessary as a subject like in the following examples from the corpus:
17
|
And now there were hands on him
|
There
|
195
|
There was a series of heavy and cracking
thumps
|
There
|
Table 16 : Existential processes
The process analysis clears that material
processes dominate the process types. Around 85% of the material processes
involve a discourse of violence. Also this is an indication that the world of
the City of Bones is more concerned
with materialistic things and people inhabiting this world do not abstain from
anything to achieve their goals even when this means killing other people or
shedding the blood of innocent. Not only the demons and attackers enjoy violent
attacks and murders, the major characters are also shown as very much keen on
violent acts. In the beginning of the novel, when shadowhunters kill a demon
boy, Isabelle hit him with her whip and then laughs. Jace too murders forsaken
and Raphael with his seraph blade but he does not show a momentarily
hesitation.
These characters share different
participant roles as both perpetrators and victims of violence. For example in
the first excerpt the group of shadowhunters are in power position and they
inflict violence and kills a demon boy. However when king of demons, Abbadon,
attacks them, they are victim. Abbadon is able to dominate them and punish them
because of his demon powers and huge size. Infact before him, they all look
dwarfs. Abbadon is able to seriously injure Alec and Isabelle because of vicious
poison he carries in his talons. Both of them are victims here.
Alec is able to bully Clary when she says
the truth about his feelings for Jace because of his gender. Similarly Clary’s
mother’s boyfriend, Luke, is able to turn his back on Clary because he has no
social responsibility towards Clary. He is not her father so he moves away from
her and asks her to never to call him for help again.
The processes of doing and controlling the
action by participants who carry them clearly marks out other processes. For
this reason, after completing the process analysis, I solely focused on those
clauses which reflected violent actions as my primary aim it to study the
participants involved in these actions to study the connection between violence
and power resulting in the construction of social identities. As discussed
earlier, identity concept is used here in the sense of membership. An
individual becomes a member of a particular social group on the basis of
characteristics/features/traits he/she shares with the other members of the
group. The study of identity will also be beneficial in uncovering the social
position of the participants and hence this will further shed light on how
these participants use their social position/situation to inflict violence on
others.
Analysis
of Identities of Violent Participants
I isolated 78 clauses which displayed
violent/cruel actions. A striking feature related to this analysis is that
material processes have high frequency of occurrence. I followed the formula of
‘what did X do?’ to study violence in these clauses. This analysis is shown in
the following table:
Actor
|
Verb
|
Goal
|
Beneficiary
|
Range
|
Circumstance
|
(Isabelle)
|
striking out
|
at him (blue-haired boy)
|
|
|
|
(Isabelle)
|
jerking
|
Him (blue-haired boy)
|
|
|
Off his feet
|
(Blue-haired boy)
|
Flung himself
|
On Jace
|
|
|
|
The blue-haired boy
|
Tearing
|
At Jace
|
|
With hands
|
|
The blue-haired boy
|
Slashed
|
At Jace
|
|
With claws extended
|
|
He (Jace)
|
sank
|
Into the blue haired boy’s chest
|
|
The knife
|
|
The creature
|
Lunged
|
At her (Clary)
|
|
|
|
The creature
|
Hurtled
|
Into her (Clary)
|
|
|
|
(The creature)
|
Knocking
|
Her (Clary)
|
|
To the ground
|
|
She (Clary)
|
Hit out
|
At the thing (the creature)
|
|
|
With a scream
|
The creature
|
Lunged for
|
Her face (Clary)
|
|
|
Jaws wide
|
She (Clary)
|
Jammed
|
Between its teeth
|
|
The sensor
|
|
He (Demon)
|
Lurched
|
At Jace
|
|
|
With his enormous fists raised
|
Jace
|
Brought
|
|
|
The seraph blade
|
Around in an arching sweep
|
(Jace)
|
Burying
|
Hilt in the giant’s shoulder
|
|
It (blade)
|
|
He (Jace)
|
Raised
|
|
|
The blade
|
Over his head
|
(Jace)
|
Brought
|
|
|
It (blade)
|
Down
|
Jace
|
Threw
|
His knife
|
|
|
|
Jace
|
Shoved
|
Her (Clary)
|
|
|
Brutally aside
|
He (Jace)
|
Flung himself
|
On the other boy
|
|
|
|
(Jace)
|
Grabbed
|
For the knife
|
|
|
Sticking out of Raphael’s chest
|
(Jace)
|
Hauling
|
Raphael
|
|
|
Upright
|
(Jace)
|
Jamming
|
Raphael’s shoulder blades
|
|
The tip of the knife
|
Between
|
She (Clary)
|
Kicking out
|
At the vampire girl
|
|
|
|
She (Vampire girl)
|
whipped
|
|
|
Her hand
|
Forward
|
(Vampire girl)
|
Striking
|
Clary’s cheek
|
|
|
With enough force
|
(Simon)
|
Launched
|
At Raphael
|
|
itself
|
|
Simon
|
Hung
|
|
|
|
Grimly from his forearm
|
He (Alec)
|
Had shoved
|
Her (Clary)
|
|
|
Against the wall so hard
|
The demon (Abbadon)
|
Leaped
|
At him (Jace)
|
|
|
|
(Jace )
|
Sank
|
Into the fleshiest part of the demon,
its abdomen
|
|
Both (blades)
|
|
It (Abbadon)
|
Struck
|
At him (Jace)
|
|
|
|
(Abbadon)
|
Knocking
|
Him (Jace)
|
|
|
Aside
|
She (Isabelle)
|
Lashed out
|
At the demon
|
|
|
With her whip
|
It
(Abbadon)
|
Struck
|
|
|
|
Again with a snarl
|
He (Abbadon)
|
Hurled
|
Him (Alec)
|
|
|
Against the far wall
|
The demon (Abbadon)
|
Caught
|
Her (Isabelle)
|
|
|
Turning
|
Abbadon
|
Knocked
|
Her (Isabelle)
|
|
|
Down again
|
He (Jace)
|
Flung
|
The seraph blade
|
At the demon (Abbadon)
|
|
|
He (Jace)
|
seized
|
seraph blade
|
|
|
Out of its chest (Abbadon)
|
(Jace)
|
Brought
|
the demon’s chest
|
|
The blade
|
Down, again and again, into
|
Table 17: Participants in the active
material processes
Material processes occur in four
variations. The above table shows the actor in active position which means that
he is conscious of what he is doing and thus in full control of it. The other
types of material processes are in passive form or a body part acts as an
initiator of action. According to Kennedy (1982), using body parts as actor has
the effect of distancing; the impression of detachment i.e. there is no
connection between the physical actions of the actor and cognition of the
actor. The actor seems to be driven by a force which he is unable to bring
under control. Another thing that is used to create the same distancing effect
between the actor and action is use of objects in the actor place. Following
table lists these three types of material processes:
Goal
|
Verb
|
Actor
|
Range
|
Circumstance
|
His hands (blue-haired boy’s)
|
Were pulled
|
|
|
Behind him
|
His wrists (blue-haired boy’s)
|
Bound
|
|
With wire
|
|
Her shoulders (Clary)
|
Were gripped
|
By Jacob
|
|
|
Back of her skull (Clary)
|
Had struck
|
|
The wood paneling
|
|
Actor
|
Verb
|
Goal
|
Range
|
Circumstance
|
(Hands)
|
Hauling
|
Him (Blue-haired boy)
|
|
upright
|
(Hands)
|
Throwing
|
Him (Blue-haired boy)
|
|
Against one of the concrete pillars
|
The enormous fists
|
Caught hold
|
Of him (Jace)
|
|
|
Hands (Lily’s)
|
Catch
|
|
At her jacket
|
|
Her booted toe (Clary)
|
Connected
|
|
|
Hard
|
His fingers
|
Digging into
|
Her skin (Clary)
|
|
|
His sharp rat teeth (Simon)
|
Sunk deep
|
Into the flesh (Raphael)
|
|
|
Its razored hand (Abbadon)
|
Lashing down
|
At Jace
|
|
|
Bone-talons (Abbadon)
|
Catching
|
Alec
|
|
|
A backhand blow
|
Sent
|
Her(Isabelle)
|
|
Spinning to the ground
|
Its hand (Abbadon)
|
Lashed out knocking
|
Jace
|
Into the stairs
|
|
Isabelle’s whip
|
Came down
|
Across his back (Blue-haired boy’s)
|
|
|
The photograph
|
Hit
|
Its midsection (Demon)
|
|
|
An object
|
Slammed
|
Into the back of her skull
|
|
Heavily
|
The blade
|
Struck
|
Home (Raphael’s chest)
|
|
|
It (Isabelle’s whip)
|
Struck
|
The demon’s grey hide
|
|
|
Alec’s featherstaff
|
Had pierced
|
Its skin (Abbadon)
|
|
|
It (Jace’s blade)
|
Stuck
|
In the creature’s chest
|
|
|
Table 18: Material processes with passive,
body part and object as actors
One major distinction is made between the
animate and inanimate goals in material processes. If an actor has more animate
goals then it means he is an effective agent of the process and exerts full
control over the situation. Out of total 63 processes listed in above tables,
51 processes carry goals and only 8 processes are goalless. These processes
represent clear violent and cruel actions in which both sides (good and evil)
equally participate in inflicting violence on each other depending on the
advantage they have on other party. Hence it can be safely said that it is not
only thinking or paragraph analysis but empirical data too proves the fact that
City of Bones exhibits an enormous amount of violence which renders this novel
unsuitable for young minds. Following table represents the complete data:
Material Process Type/ Actor
|
Total Number of Processes
|
Animate Goals
|
Inanimate Goals
|
Goalless
|
Active
|
41
|
31
|
4
|
6
|
Passive
|
4
|
4
|
-
|
-
|
Body Parts
|
11
|
9
|
-
|
2
|
Objects
|
7
|
7
|
-
|
-
|
Total
|
63
|
51
|
4
|
8
|
Table 19: Division of goals in material
processes
There are 9 instances of violence in
verbal processes. These processes are processes of ‘saying’ or ‘communicating’
( Downing and Locke, 2006, 151) and are represented by verbs like say, tell,
ask, repeat and answer. They have one participant called sayer who conveys the
message and the second participant is called receiver. The message is called
verbiage. The examples found are displayed in table below.
Sayer
|
Verbal Process
|
Verbiage
|
Receiver
|
It (Demon)
|
Hissed
|
“Girl, flesh, blood. To eat, oh, to eat”
|
Clary
|
It (Demon)
|
Moaned
|
“to eat, to eat, but it is not allowed,
to swallow, to savor”
|
|
He (Luke)
|
Said
|
“Don’t call me for favors again”
|
|
He (Luke)
|
Added
|
“I’ve got my own problems, I don’t need
to be bothered with yours”
|
|
He (Jace)
|
Said
|
“I can pierce your heart just as easily
through your back”
|
|
She (Clary)
|
Said
|
“Or he’ll put that blade through
Raphael’s heart”
|
|
He (Raphael)
|
Shouted
|
“seize the trespassers, kill them both-
the rat as well”
|
|
He (Alec)
|
Whispered
|
“Don’t you ever, ever, say anything like
that to him or I’ll kill you. I swear to angel, I’ll kill you”
|
|
It (Abbadon)
|
Snarled
|
“shadowhunter, I shall take pleasure in
killing you, in hearing your bones crunch as your friend’s did-”
|
|
Table 20: verbal processes with violent
content
As we can observe from the table Clary is
both a victim and perpetrator. It is only a matter of her social situation.
When she has the power she threatens to kill Raphael, hence plays the role of
violence inflictor but as Raphael rose to power position, Clary becomes a
victim of violence. Similar pattern is followed by other characters in the
novel.
By
investigating the results of the study of participants, four different
identities that could be said to be the perpetrators of violent acts were
identified:
i)
Parents/partners
Under this category, there are two people
who commit violence but more on psychological level than physical level. These
are Clary’s own mother and her boyfriend, Luke, whom she views as a father
figure. But Clary only seems to be delusional because the moment she is in dire
need of these people; they are not there to help her. Clary’s mother erases all
her memories and puts a memory block on her mind. Though she gives the lame
excuse that this is the only way to save her daughter, she robbed Clary’s
memories and also violate the privacy of her mind. She was able to do this
psychological violence because of her power position as she was the parent and
mature person, this gives her right to bring up her daughter in any way she
liked.
Next person in this identity is of course
Luke. As Clary calls him after the kidnapping of her mother and demon attack on
her, instead of listening to her and consoling her, he reprimands her for
calling him and tells her never to call him again and ask for help. He was able
to refuse help because of his social position.
ii)
Saviours
Under this identity, I have placed the
Shadowhunters i.e., Jace, Isabelle and Alec. They share this identity because
of their fight against the demons. Although they do inflict violence on demons
but it is only to stop them from disturbing the peace of human world. They hold
a power position because of their virtues and ethics. They do not kill any
human being and neither do they involve themselves in any other kind of
malignant activity but when it comes to fight and end demons, they are as
voracious and fierce as a lioness. Jace is recognized as a most accomplished
shadowhunter because he has killed more underworlders and demons than other
persons. This fact puts him in a
powerful position and he acts as a leader and guiding force for other
shadowhunters.
iii)
Destructors
As its name hints, this identity is shared
by demons, forsakens and vampires. They are the representation of evil forces
and inflict violence to extend the boundaries of darkness and hatred. Their
sole aim is destruction and killing. They do not care whether they kill an
innocent person or a criminal. In their minds, no difference of this kind
exists. Most importantly, they have a serious dislike for sahdowhunters and
humans. They are able to commit violence on account of their evil powers. For
example, a forsaken, demon and vampires all attack Clary because she does not
possess any special powers tp prevent them or to murder them. So they use their
powerful positions to get their goals accomplished.
iv)
Helpers
There is only one participant who comes
under this identity category. He is Simon, Clary’s friend. He inflicts pain on
Raphael to save his friends. As Raphael readies himself to sink his vampire
teeth in Jace’s throat, Simon lashes out at Raphael and uses his forced
conversion position as a rat to his advantage and attacks Raphael’s arm. Simon
bits Raphael so hard that he has no choice but to let go off Jace. Although for
the sake of help but Simon’s refuge to violence keeps him from becoming an
ideal character to be followed by teens as message it provides is that violence
is the solution for everything.
To sum up, as Santaemilia (2000,13)
argues, power can be measured in many different ways: according to social
prestige, to reputation, to psychological control, intelligence or sexual seduction.
In The City of Bones Corpus, power is measured either in terms of social
status, either political or familiar or in terms of greater strength due to
magic or to gender inequalities. The victim is most of the times a less aware
person and the perpetrator, predominantly, a person with a high social status.
First, I studied the frequencies of all
the words contained in The Corpus, focusing on those lexical items related
directly or indirectly to violent processes.
In addition, I carried out a study of 6 processes in which I found out
that material processes were the dominant ones. The relationship between the
types of predominant processes and violence is, in my opinion, a crucial
finding in the present study since material processes articulate an action
carried out by an entity, the Actor, able to have the intention of starting,
controlling and ending an action and thus, inferring a volitional feature to
those violent acts in the City of Bones
novel.
Transitivity has made this analysis
possible because it deals with the transmission of ideas and thoughts. Hence
based on the violent acts in the novel, I was able to show how power and
violence are related and how power position used to perpetuate violent acts
lead me analyse the identity construction of characters fit in.
Conclusion
The combination of corpus and discourse
analysis with computational analysis proves my hypothesis that City of Bones contains a high content of
violence. The wordlist provided me with most frequent words that were directly
related to the violence such as blood,
kill and hit. Further the
analysis of transitivity provided conclusive evidence that the world of City of Bones is marked by material
actions and most often these material actions have a singular aim, i.e. violence.
On the basis of transitivity analysis, I was able to label out the victims of
the violence and doers of the violence. And clears further hypothesis that
violence is a fluid category i.e. both perpetrators and victims share these
positions. A victim is also who commits violence and perpetrator is also the
one who is victim of violence. Thus, this shows that there is no fixed category
of victims and perpetrators of violence, but only a position of power is a
determiner of these categories and as power keeps on shifting so does these
categories. Therefore young readers may take the message after reading this
novel that if he/she is in a situation where he/she has the power/advantage
over others, violent acts are acceptable and vice versa. Therefore the violence
content of these novels must be curtailed in order to make them an enjoyable
and at the same time educative reads for young adults for whom these are
marketed and written.
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