Darjeeling
Between creases of sleep and wakeful states of
years
the molten sunlight flits on ikshkus leaves
eternity breathes behind the other slope
Darjeeling exists in a dream.
Pine trees shiver in green pherans
their aging shoulders stoop, touch mine
peace flags with Buddha’s message
flap colorful undertones in the wind.
Kitchen fumes spiral upwards
like affirmations of some hermetic faith
each footstep replies to the other in boulevard
silence
chorbatos
meander deep down into the unconscious.
Memories swirl on teagarden gradients
yearning days, beggar nights, dim yellow-bulbed
love-makings
cross the road to Oxford bookstore
like the penumbra of a kite’s full wingspan.
A whiff of horses’ pungent smell
the gale eats into the flesh, rain.
I wrap a half-wet dream in my woolen shawl, scrawl
a name on a condensed windowpane.
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Zinia Mitra
teaches English in the University of North Bengal. She writes from Siliguri,
Darjeeling. Her poems have been published in National and International
journals. She has authored books.
Offline memory processing is very close to dreaming. Here Zinia is painting with words, and, not a surreal picture.
ReplyDeleteThank you MDB. Yes, Darjeeling has preserved my memories.
DeleteA careful reading of the poem transports a reader to every nook and corner and vast glory of the ' Queen of Hills', Darjeeling.The poet writes,'Memories swril on teagarden gradients yearning days...the Oxford bookstall....' and the like. The composition is beautiful, indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank you anonymous. I am glad you liked my poem.
DeleteZinia
A soothing palm rest on the forehead when reading this poem. Beautifully sketched
ReplyDeleteThank you Bob D' Costa for your appreciation. Glad you like it.
DeleteZinia
A soothing palm rest on the forehead when reading this poem. Beautifully sketched
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful. The use of imagery is outstanding!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I cannot make out who you are.
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Zinia
Just read your poem. I felt I was in Darjeeling. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteZinia
Thank you for your comment.
DeleteZinia
Beautifully composed
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation.
DeleteZinia
sensuality and transcendetnalism put together. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI felt that I was in Darjeeling.
ReplyDeleteI am glad the poem made you feel you were in Darjeeling.
DeleteThanks.
Zinia
Wonderful imagery...
ReplyDeleteKitchen fumes spiral upwards
like affirmations of some hermetic faith
Thank you so much Robert.I am glad you liked it.
DeleteZinia
Wonderful imagery...
ReplyDeleteKitchen fumes spiral upwards
like affirmations of some hermetic faith
Wonderful imagery...
ReplyDeleteKitchen fumes spiral upwards
like affirmations of some hermetic faith
Wonderful imagery...
ReplyDeleteKitchen fumes spiral upwards
like affirmations of some hermetic faith
You took me to Darjeeling. Darjeeling is my favourite place in West Bengal.
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