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Ram Sharma - Three Poems

Dr. Ram Sharma

SAVE

Save a moon for myself,
All the star and sun,
Try to save these,
Also save the rainbow in the sky,
Save the birds,
Save the flowers,
Also save yourself

THINK ABOUT ENVIRONMENT

The colours of roses are fading,
poison is mixing in the air,
the heads of trees,
are being cut,
birds are flying without home,
butterflies are lying dead,
like dead leaves,
water, air, earth,
all are not the same,
mammonism is hovering,
the world is becoming,
a crematorium

CHIRPING OF BIRDS

sweet melodious invitation of cuckoo
greedy flights of crows
chirping of homely birds
green cries of parrots
or dancing of peacocks or cries
where are these now?
Yes, there voices are there
in the ringtones of mobiles
or in hanging bells
where are hanging nests
is this our real progress
from living with all to just self
these chirping ringtones are clarion call
to return back to those
whom we have forgotten.

Poetry Recital: Scott Thomas Outlar

Poetry Recital by Scott Thomas Outlar Scott
Thomas Outlar hosts the site 17Numa.wordpress.com where links to his published poetry, fiction, essays, interviews, and books can be found. He is a Best of the Net and Pushcart Prize nominee whose work has appeared in hundreds of literary venues, both in the United States and internationally. Scott serves as an editor for Walking Is Still Honest Press, The Blue Mountain Review, The Peregrine Muse, and Novelmasters.

Scott Thomas Outlar

Irish Writing: Arthur Broomfield

"The night Bannan’s Threshing Mill arrived  in our yard"

(In memory of Johnny Bannan who died May 11 2011)

Johnny Bannan won my respect
the day he declined to wash his hands
‘they’re grand Ma’am, thanks’;
he spoke with  the assurance
of one who knows his options.
My mother fussed
and poured his tea.

His overalls, decorated
with medals of exotic grease
sparkled in the reflection
of the Aladdin lamp
that lit our kitchen.
Amorphous transfers
to his face and neck,
from his oily fingers,
confirmed the mystical status
of the Lieutenant  of the Leviathan.

I imagined his railwayman’s cap
badged and braided,
the armour plated engine storming along the front,
he leaning out the side door
barking glad tidings
of bushel weight
to expectant farmers,
at agricultural speed.

I, held back on my father’s knee,
wanted to be second in command
in his benevolent army,
to be there when he swung
the starting handle that fired the pistons,
to carry the drums of T.V.O.
that smelled of the future,
to befriend him,
to give him a hand.


Bio: Dr Arthur Broomfield

Dr Arthur Broomfield is a poet, novelist, short story writer and Beckett scholar from County Laois, Ireland. His published works include When the Dust Settles  (International University Press 1993),  Language and Philosophy in the works of Samuel Beckett (Cambridge Scholars' Publishing 2014) Mice at the Threshing (Lapwing 2015) and Cold Coffee at Emo Court (Revival Press 2016)


Irish Writing :: Table of Contents, May 2017

Shakespeare Under the Stars

A very strange interlude in the life of Sidewalks Theater, Theater Musings
by Gary Beck

Gary Beck
Sidewalks Theater was in the middle of a cycle of Aristophanes plays and a core group of the company had been together for a while. We had just finished workshop productions and a six week run of The Birds, to appreciative audiences and even fair reviews. Although I was reminded by a noted critic that ‘I wasn’t Zero Mostel’. I didn’t bother telling him that I never thought I was, preferring dignified silence to a disclaimer of a delusional disorder.

We usually spent the summer touring, or doing programs for underserved and neglected audiences. The previous summer, for example, we toured Aristophanes ‘The Women in Assembly’ to 25 public housing developments in all 5 boroughs of New York City, as well as other public service and college performances. Audiences of every type and age level loved the show. A number of actors had left us when we ended the run. Rather then recast, I opted for a change in the regular production schedule. I decided it was time to do a Shakespeare play.

I couldn’t conceive of doing Hamlet without a complete cast of talented and skilled actors, way beyond our budget. However, the core group was talented and capable, so I chose one of the most accessible comedies for those with limited resources, ‘All’s Well That Ends Well’.
We couldn’t afford a nice venue, so I arranged to do the show with an erratic, slightly disreputable theater manager. He had various theater spaces in an old courthouse building in Manhattan’s West 50’s. They were all dirty, decrepit and decayed, but we would be using an outdoor courtyard, which we assumed a brief cleaning would suffice to make it presentable.

An educational digression. We had done shows at different Off-Broadway and Off-Off Broadway theaters when we didn’t have our own theater. In virtually every instance, the space was filthy, unmaintained and required repairs of stage and seating to preserve the safety of the audience and actors. In one noted Off-Broadway house there were big holes in the walls on street level for people to peer through from outside. Their lighting instruments, some of which weighed 20 – 25 pounds, were barely secured by string, the same type string used in a bakery to tie your box of cookies, hanging dangerously over the audience as well as the stage.

In another well known Off-Broadway theater, the seats weren’t attached to the floor, the emergency exits were blocked with piles of lumber. I could go on about how some diminutive theater mentalities seemed to think it was normal and acceptable to operate a dangerous pig-sty. We were always hated for daring to clean, make repairs, and paint before starting rehearsals and tech. I believe a theater should always be clean, comfortable and up to fire code for the pleasure and safety of the audience. They don’t teach these values in college drama departments. I leave it to the reader to try to understand why so many middle-class offspring are so dedicated to creating filthy theater spaces.

The outdoor courtyard, where I had arranged to perform ‘All’s Well’, hadn’t been cleaned in years. The light board had been left uncovered, in the open, through at least one winter and had a 2” layer of pigeon shit. It required major overhaul. There were only 2 lighting instruments, elderly fresnels, that had to be taken apart and cleaned and we had to bring in our own lights and cables. The stage, four rickety, collapsing 4’x8’ platforms, came with a collection of bottles and jars containing urine and feces that belonged to a homeless man living under the platforms in a nest of cardboard. Another man lived under the fire escape stairs that led from the building to the courtyard, except his was he was neat as a pin, with bookshelves and a reading light on an extension cord and cans of bugspray and Lysol. Each evening while we were there, his bed was vacant and the curtain hiding it was closed. The stench under the platforms made chemical warfare envious. It took our tech crew hours and hours of unpleasant labor to clean, then disinfect the area with ammonia, instead of their starting to take down the useless set.

My regular designer had made other commitments, assuming we would tour The Birds, so I was compelled to hire a costume and set designer. We had a limited budget, which invariably allows for limited talent. The exception this time was the set designer, a talented young woman who came up with a multi-level platform that could have come out of a textbook of classical design. Every rose has its you know whats. She brought her boyfriend to assist her, a moderately competent, but obnoxious oaf, oblivious to all the other work going on, including rehearsals.

I was not so lucky with the costume designer. She was typical of the Off-Off Broadway breed with questionable talent and minimal skills. A sad commentary. She was the best I could find for a small fee. She was scrupulously obliging at the beginning of the project, until I requested preliminary sketches and fabric samples. She thought this was unreasonable. A bad sign. Then she smiled gamely and said all will be well. She had five weeks to make 14 costumes, most of them fairly simple. This seemed easily achievable.

I had started casting five weeks before we moved into the space, where we would have two weeks to work before opening night. The core group had already learned their lines and were building their characters, thus setting an example to newcomers. I prefer working with actors who I worked with before, not always feasible Off-Off Broadway.  In the first part of auditions, I had 20 actors assemble in a rehearsal studio and I gave them an overview of my work process. I stressed that I worked with life and death like intensity to create a living fabric onstage, not a museum piece.

One girl was troubled by what she considered my harsh method of approaching a revered classic. She stood up and whimpered about ‘how Shakespeare should be performed with delicacy and sensitivity’. She had realized she had fallen into the hands of theater barbarians. Before I could cut her off and thank her for coming, Autry, a capable, talented actor, who had been with us for a full production cycle of ‘The Birds’, stood up, turned to her and said: “F**k that shit.” He happened to be very big, very black, and scared her into abrupt flight, thus saving me the chore. I ended up casting six newcomers, five men and a woman. All the men had at least several years minimum of experience and had gone through a demanding audition cycle. They were eager, cooperative, and happy to be doing a Shakespeare play. Considering the generally meager talent Off-Off-Broadway, they were an acceptable lot.

We started rehearsals in an indoor space in the complex (after a thorough sweep and mop). The newcomers fit right in with the core group and were working well. It took two weeks of prodding, but the costumer produced a few sketches, promising more in a few days. Then she finally measured the actors. The first night we were to work in the outdoor space, the manager couldn’t be found. A bad sign. Several of us climbed a 10 foot courtyard wall, then jimmied the door open to let everyone in. The manager showed up later and was outraged that we climbed the wall. By the time we got into the outdoor space, with two weeks to go before opening night, the costumer had stopped returning phone calls. She finally told our production manager, Robert, that she’d bring half the costumes in a few days. She temporarily reassured him, so I concentrated on other problems.

At this time I was the artistic director and executive director of Sidewalks of New York Productions, that included Sidewalks Theater, a video production company and outreach programs in a Bronx public housing development and a boy’s prison facility. There was endless writing of grant proposals and administrative work, not including my own work as a playwright and translator of the next Greek comedy we would produce, Aristophanes’ Lysistrata. The only way I could direct ‘All’s Well’, and keep up all my other chores, was to set up a work table in the rehearsal area and work there from 8 a.m. to 10 p.m., only getting up to go to the bathroom, or stretch.

The oaf boyfriend assisting the set designer became a constant annoyance. He deliberately walked through the actors while we were rehearsing, made as much noise as possible whenever he was near me, and left tools, scrap wood and other debris in the rehearsal area. He sulked when I asked him to move things, then mumbled resentfully. By the third day he was becoming a menace to safety and I decided to have a talk with him and try to improve his attitude. Before I could do this he laid cable for the lighting instruments, not his job, that wasn’t supposed to be done for several days, including through our rehearsal area. I asked him to gaffer tape the cable so no one would trip on it and he freaked out, screaming: “You sit around all day telling everyone what to do, while we’re all working.” Then he started towards me threateningly. Work stopped. Robert moved behind him, ready to knock him down if he attacked me, but I stared him down. Then I told him he was fired. He grabbed his personal things and left cursing all of us.

The designer, his girl friend, came up to me and said she wouldn’t work without him and was quitting. I described some of the things he had been doing, but she didn’t care and prepared to leave. I then told her pleasantly that if she quit I’d make sure she’d never design a legitimate theater production again, which scared her. She caved, went back to work, hating me, another dramatic episode in a small theater company. But I got rid of the oaf and if I handled her carefully I’d get a good set.

So on we worked and waited for the light, which was still in question due to the decrepit condition of the lightboard. During the pre-production period, the theater manager, rather then helping us in any way, complained bitterly that we didn’t have the right to build a set, paint the peeling walls, repair the seats, etc. But rehearsal was going well and with a week to go the play was shaping up satisfactorily. Then the next costume crisis. After fervent promises, we still hadn’t gotten any costumes. There was no time to hire another costumer and truth be known I might not have done much better. If lighting designers were 80% competent Off-Off Broadway, set designers 60%, costumers were between 35% and 40%. A sad reality in a mostly self-indulgent environment.

We were faced with the dread alternatives of costuming the actors in black leotards and tights, a dreary expectation at best. Robert, the long suffering production manager, with his eight year old son, Daemon, who had been an assistant stage manager at our theater for years, went to the costumer’s apartment. At first she wouldn’t answer the bell, or their knock. Then Daemon sweet-talked her and she promised to bring the costumes to the theater in two days. Daemon, already a bit cynical about erratic costumers, told me it was the best they could do. On Sunday, two days before dress rehearsal, when she didn’t show up, they went to her house again. She wouldn’t open the door, but told them she’d bring the costumes Tuesday morning. When again she didn’t appear, they went to her house, pounded on the door until she opened it under threat of their bringing the police. She gave them whatever she had. All the principal’s costumes were  half finished, the others all needed major work. It was a mess.

Dress rehearsal Tuesday night was in street clothes and everyone worked well. The show ran about 2 ½ hours, with one 10 minute intermission. When we finished, I praised the actors and the techs and told them our costume problem. All the core group actors volunteered to sew costumes. The newcomers followed suit. Despite the objection of the theater manager, we took over an empty space in the building and sewed away until four in the morning. Everyone seemed to have a fun, social time, however unexpected the demand. The costumes weren’t great, but everyone had a period costume and they were presentable, although some of them were pinned or hot glue gunned together. Another minor theater miracle. Most of the actors had to work on opening day. They weren’t the bartender class actors, who made good money dispensing booze, and really didn’t want to perform, just audition once in a while to retain the illusion of being an actor.

The cast assembled at 6:00 p.m. for the regular pre-rehearsal warm-up. We had set up tarped areas in a backstage space for dressing. The show began a little later then 8:00 p.m., due to last minute costume adjustments. All the new men, who had been macho and articulate throughout rehearsals and dress rehearsal, suddenly tumbled out of the closet and presented the gay follies. Their physical and vocal mannerisms that made a travesty of the work we had done. The rest of us were horrified, but to the credit of the core group, they did their jobs properly and well, despite the grotesqueries going on around them. I tried talking to the suddenly demented dolts at intermission, but they were unresponsive. Autry and some of the core group men wanted to beat them, but I stopped that. The bitterest pill that night was the audience didn’t seem to notice the difference between two different types of performance.

My choice was simple. Close the show, which meant that we would have wasted our time, money and creative effort, or live with the offensive outbreak. I decided to continue, but we divided into two groups, one doing serious Shakespeare, the other doing high camp. We set up a separate dressing area for the newcomers and left them to their own devices. The core group of 6 men, three of whom were gay, performed with passion and integrity, gradually overcoming the silly antics of the others who lost stage credibility and became almost invisible. We actually managed, despite the negative factors, to do a good show.

We did 6 shows a week for 6 weeks, and somehow, in an incredibly rainy summer, the rain always held off until the final curtain. The performances were frequently accompanied by dramatic thunder and lightning courtesy of Mother Nature, which would have been ideal if we were doing Macbeth.  Of course there were always ongoing problems. How else could it be in the not-for-profit theater world? But we overcame them and the show always went on, something I always prided myself about. The worst disruption on opening night was by the idiot theater manager. He had stipulated the show had to end by 11:00 p.m. It was scheduled to end between 10:44 and 10:45, but ran late due to a late start. The dolt shut off the building’s power, which included our theater lighting, at 11:00, with five minutes to go, without bothering to check if the show was still on. Robert flew up five flights of stairs to his office and promised to fracture his skull if he didn’t put on the power. Robert demonstrated Einstein’s Lesser Theory of Relativity in his time shattering flight.

A few days after the production closed, while I was still enjoying the pleasure of not seeing the childish, stupid actors again, I found myself idly wondering if sewing costumes the night before opened some sort of gay portal that transferred onto the stage. Then again, the core group’s gay actors weren’t infected by the sewing virus. So it became one more weird occurrence in the strange life of an ongoing theater company.

Three Poems by J├│zsef B├нr├│

DIGNIFIED IMAGE
REFLECTED BY MIRROR IN TWELVE LINES

WE   GET   ON   WELL   TOGETHER
-             ...      ...      /      ...             -

I   DON’T   LOOK   ANYONE   IN   THE   EYE
-             ...      ...      /      ...             -

I’M   OBSESSED   WITH     THE   FUTURE
-             ...      ...      /      ...             -

IT’S   HARD   NOT   TO   HATE   IN   A   SITUATION   LIKE   THIS
-             ...      ...      /      ...             -

OFTEN   FEEL   LIKE      DON  QUIXOTE
J├│zsef B├нr├│
-             ...      ...      /      ...             -

LIFE   HERE   IS   JUST   SURVIVAL
-             ...      ...      /      ...             -

03. 1937. DECEMBER

...  self  –  murderer  –  poem  ...  :

AT TI LA     J├У ZSEF  ...  on track

...  :   21 grams   ...  : N  plus  ONE


LETTER’S FRAGMENT FROM NEVER – LAND

(  -    to   Roi Vaara   -  )


there  is  no    /    –   ...
there  is  not  sense  in  all  this    /    –   ...
it  is  meaningless    /    –   ...
this  is  all  nonsense    /    –   ...
there  is  nothing  to  do    /    –   ...
there  is  nothing  to  be  done    /    –   ...
there  is  no    help    /    –   ...
you    can’t    get    blood  out  of  a  stone    /    –   ...
where    nothing    is    nothing    can    be    had    /    –   ...
destitution    /    –   ...
penury    /    –   ...
necessarily    /    –   ...
nugatory    /    –   ...
...    /    –   ...
...    /    –
...    /
...

...         et   cetera    /    –   ...


[   ––      ALTHOUGH   I   TOLD   HIM   SO      ––––––––––––––––––––  :

-   otherwise   -       A   STITCH   HAS   RUN   IN   MY   EYES      ––   ]

The Mortgaged Man by Pitambar Tarai

BOOK REVIEW by Dr. Jaydeep Sarangi


Jaydeep Sarangi
Odiya Dalit Poet Writes Back

The Mortgaged Man
Pitambar Tarai
Translated from the original Odia
Sidhesh Publishing House, Cuttack, 2017
Pages 108
ISBN 978-81-930875-1-0
Rs. 110/-

The word 'Dalit' does not signify a particular caste but stands for an awareness of the everyday lived experiences of those human beings belonging to the lowest strata of caste hierarchy in a stratified society in India. The feeling is of oppressed and deprived by the age-old stereotypes. Dalit literature intends to articulate this social, cultural, political and religious oppression perpetrated in this country. “Awareness of this oppression does not simply manifest itself in torrid descriptions of Dalit life. Rather, it attempts to derive out of these experiences a new value system that would help dalits to carve out a new social reality.” (Jatin Bala: 167-68)

No militant movement or rebellion on the part of dalits has taken place in Odisha (like what happened in Maharashtra) which does not negate the suffering and angst of the dalits. One can take a dalit poem and feel the rhythm of distress and anguish arising out of the pain  suffering for generations. Pitambar Tarai (b. 1959) is an Odisha Sahitya Academy awarded poet. Many poems in  The Mortgaged Man is rich in aesthetic responsibility towards life:
“Since childhood I knew
at the north end of our village lie
like two separated brothers
two ancient cremation grounds(.)” (‘Untouchable’,  p. 17 )


Another associated aim of dalit literature is the creation of a literary circle that will nurture younger talent and train them to work for dalit liberation. They will usher in a casteless society with one united race inhabiting it – the Indians.

Progressive literature movement aims at the projection of a socialist order, the appeal of Dalit literature lies in its remarkable life force, in the portrayal of the Dalit way of life, their painful lived experiences, the denials they face, the resistance they offer and in the creation of an ideology. If one has to fight against the established social order, then an alternate value system pertaining to the Dalit way of life must first be decided upon. This in turn necessitates a paradigm shift – a cultural revolution. Pitambar writes,
 “I am the gate of hell.” ( Woman, 108)
Land is a haunting place for the dalits in India. They are displaced from the mainstream:
“My ancestors had not
Attempted to buy a piece of land” (‘A Piece of Land’, p.37)

Dalit texts are about a movement:
“If you like,
Shoot me with arrow.” ( ‘The Bird’, p. 98 )


 So, any work of translation involving these texts  is a social engagement. Dalit literary movements emblematiss a fight against untouchability and the resultant socio-economic divide. Pitambar in The Mortgaged Man writes,
“Oh unredeemed man!
On the outskirts for thousand years (.)”  (‘ Man on the Outskirts’, p. 64)

Pitambar’s poetic idioms  are subtle, specific   and   razor-sharp where the  poetic corpus retains as an inviting discourse:
“Friends, better not ask
of the house.”   (The House, p. 24)
In an Interview with Jaydeep Sarangi Tamil dalit writer/activist  Bama Faustima exclaims, “It (Dalit Literature)  is the literature of oppressed people It liberates them and gives them their identity. It heals them and strengthens them to fight for their rights.” (Muse India, Issue  42, 2012)

Like many contemporary  poets from Odisha, Pitambar is an ardent lover of rain  and rivers which bring a promise of renewed vitality.
“See, she a serpent
no, never a river.”  (‘The River’, P.29)

His  aim is to achieve cleansing of the minds by purgation of  pent-up feelings and angst. He is a committed artist. His poems remind us poems on rain and rivers by Niranjan Mohanty and Bibhu Padhi. Pitambar is a part of an amazing tradition and legacy of poets.   

The aim of dalit literature movement is to facilitate dalit liberation. This journey is just nothing to something. The wheel has started turning. Dalit writers are writing back. We cannot deny the intermingling of thoughts, contexts, engagements   and concepts of these writers, which make them unique. They are aware selves who can think beyond a definite boundary and create their own space.
Pitambar drums up optimism.  Some poems in this collection pop up a prophetic note of hope and  renewal of humane feelings:
“Wait, Wait
Wait and stop.”  (‘The River’, P.29 )

Translation is an intimate act of reading. Translation is like transfer of power. Identity is always a kind of representation of oneself to Others. There is a power hierarchy between the Bhasa text and the translated one. Emancipation of dalits is constantly on-going movement. It has seen many changes. Translators of this  collection  from Odiya to English include Jayanta Mahapatra, Panchanan Dalai, Amiya Kumar Patra, Sapan Kumar Jena, Kmal Kumar Mohanty, Bibhudatta Mohanty, Rajendra Das, Namita Nayak, Kishore Panigrahi, and Gobinda Sahoo. Translators have tried to remain close to the texts in original. A good foreword to the book would have given us the background and the immediate literary contexts of the poet and his commitments. Poems in this collection go beyond a predictable tag and attain universality in appeal.
No doubt the reader will not remain indifferent after encountering  the poems in this collected volume, The Mortgaged Man.
Notes:“Bama Faustina: Conversation with Jaydeep Sarangi”, Muse India: http://www.museindia.com/viewarticle.asp?myr=2012&issid=45&id=3636“Jaydeep Sarangi in Conversation with Jatin Bala”, Stories of Social Awakening: Reflections of Dalit Refugee Lives of Bengal, Paperback by Jatin Bala (Author), Jaydeep Sarangi (Editor),   Authorspress, New Delhi, 2017.

Creativity: A Venture Into Eternity

Wani Nazir
Wani Nazir (Pulwama, J&K, India)

Creativity is essentially the process of bringing into being. It is a yearning for immortality -an endeavour of breaking free the shackles of finitude and reaching out to the Infinite. This spots the mysterious fountainhead of creative literature and the ultimate source from which it derives its value and strength.

To transgress the ambits of the finite and to touch the hem of the infinite is to usher in the realm of the indescribable, the unsayable and the ineffable, but this is, on the dot, the miracle of creative art. That is to say to express the inexpressible, to describe the indescribable and to dive into the sea of the infinite make art eternal. William Blake and Ghalib translate this truth into poetry in their peculiar way:
"To see a world in a grain of sand
And a heaven in a wild flower; 
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour.” 
                            Blake

"Qatra mein dajla dikhayi na de aur juzu mein kul
Khel ladkoon ka hua, deeda e beena na hua
"
                                                                         Ghalib


A creative artist excursions out of the spatio-temporal limits and reaches all and belongs to all without ceasing to exist to his time and space. He cruises his imagination to the universal and the timeless, albeit containing himself within the particular, the historical and the spatio-temporal. A creative artist encounters with the external world- his raw material and moulds it into an organic unity, and transmogrifies chaos into cosmos. In Coleridge's words he "dissolves, diffuses, dissipates in order to recreate.” He encounters the external reality to forge in the smithy of his soul the uncreated conscience of his race. 

At the close of "A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man", James Joyce's hero pens down in his diary:
             "Welcome, O life I go to encounter for the millionth time the reality of experience and to forge in the smithy of his soul the uncreated conscience of my race."
The phrase "I go to encounter for the millionth time” is really pregnant with profundity and richness. In other words, every encounter is a new experience, and to encounter "the reality of experience” is at the root of all creativity. The task of forging in the smithy of soul is as onerous as the blacksmith's task of bending red hot iron in his smithy to make something of value.

An act of creativity requires so much courage. Why? Because it is as difficult as forging in the smithy of one's soul. Down through the history, creative figures have consistently found themselves at war, in struggle. Degas once wrote, "A painter paints a picture with the same feeling as that with which a criminal commits a crime.” Creativity is a Promethean task and all artists have to get their "livers eaten away by vulture" so certainly that they vow never to express their vision. But during "night their liver grows back again ", and they wake up full of enthusiasm and verve again to strive in the smithy of their soul. Iqbal attests this idea by proclaiming:
"Naqsh hai sab na tamaam Khoon e jigar ke bagair
Nagma hai soda e kham khoon e jigar ke bagair
"

Again the same melancholy is strained by a Kashmiri bard, Mohiuddin Gowhar, in his collection, Rikhi:
"Shairas asaan chi zakhman zeu Anin."

The creative act is an encounter between two poles, the subjective and the objective, the within and the without. In "Poetry and Experience", Archibald MacLeish uses the most universal terms for the poles -"Being and Non-being" In the same book, he quotes a Chinese poet who has said, "We poets struggle with Non-being to force it to yield Being. We knock upon silence for an answering music.” This means that the Being which the poem is to contain derives from the Non-being, not from the poet; and the music which the poem is to own comes from the Silence. The poet's toil is to clash head-on with the meaninglessness and silence of the world until he forces it to mean, and until he makes the silence answer and the Non-being be. An artist does not run away from the Non-being, but by taking the bull by the horns and wrestling with it, forces it to produce Being. He pursues meaninglessness until he can force it to mean.
The greatness of the art is that it portrays the artist's vision cued off by his encounter with the reality. It is because of this very fact that art is original always, never to be duplicated. W H Auden has remarked: "The poet marries the language and out of this marriage the poem is born.”

An artist has to first destroy the language he uses in order to create an edifice of immortal art. Picasso's comment "Every act of creation is first of all an act of destruction" holds water with regard to the act of creativity. Here, destroying the language means to tax the words with meaning which they otherwise don't carry. That is done by breaking and wrenching language. It is because of this act, a single word in a poem may carry a harvest of meaning, or to say plurisignification.

Here I am again reminded of Ghalib who asserts:
"Ganjeena e ma'na ka tilism isse samje
Jo lafz ki Ghalib mere ash'aar mein awei"

By creating new and myriad of meaning, an artist is elevated to the level where he becomes co-equal with God. An artist cannot create like God, and I, too, do believe it, yet has the capacity to change the divine creation with divine help, guidance and grace. In spite of his limitations, he can bring about change in himself and his environs. This is his sphere of creation and freedom.
"Tu shab afreedi, chirag afreedam 
Sifal afreedi, ayyag afreedam 
Bayaban o kohsaar o zaag afreedam 
Khayaban o gulzar o bagh afreedam 
Man anam ki az sang ayeena sazam
Man anam ki az zi har nausheena sazam"             
Iqbal
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Setu in May - Sunil Sharma

May comes with a certain existential sadness, inevitable and typical of organic existence; a state caused by the prolonged illness of an old mother and the attendant shadow of mortality looming larger by the day. You feel finite and vulnerable before a force higher than you. Stare into the face of uncertainty. Agonizing!  Despair sets in. Out of the dark mood is born the acceptance of human fate in a vast universe--- the pragmatism of survival in a bleak condition; such awareness aided and heightened by the great arts by providing helpful insights.

Keats captures the fragility of human condition so beautifully in this deathless song that continues to resonate across time and space:

Sunil Sharma
Fade far away, dissolve, and quite forget 
  What thou among the leaves hast never known, 
The weariness, the fever, and the fret 
  Here, where men sit and hear each other groan; 
Where palsy shakes a few, sad, last gray hairs,
  Where youth grows pale, and spectre-thin, and dies; 
    Where but to think is to be full of sorrow 
          And leaden-eyed despairs, 
  Where Beauty cannot keep her lustrous eyes, 
    Or new Love pine at them beyond to-morrow.

The personal can tinge the impersonal; the subjective, the objective, in a strange dichotomy. The immediate context shapes up the perspective. Sometimes, it is rosy; sometimes, it is melancholic. Together they constitute a process---called life!
It is like that--- sadness alternating with joyous hope.
Shadow followed by light…ceaseless manner.
Change is the only constant.
Motion is eternal.
Arts capture this essential realization most delicately... like a hypnotic Turner painting. 

This issue---the XII number---is replete with both the contrasting moods of a hot-n-humid May: Summer coming to an end soon; the hint of the rains on the darkening horizon---and a promise of rejuvenation. And,  a new start.

As usual, lot of variety is packed here. The special focus is on the recent Irish Writing curated by the talented poet Margaret O’Driscoll---a lovely symphony of voices from that land of Joyce and Shaw. So fascinating!

Gary Beck talks of Shakespeare and the theater for a different audience and conditions with a masterly flourish. 

Poet Janine Pickett takes us down a great journey that is both personal and literary, expertly revealing the inner and the outer environments, operating within works of an author-thinker.  A rich amalgam!

Versatile Scott Thomas Outlar is on You Tube, reaching out to global lovers of poetry by experimenting with this most popular medium, thus extending the reach of words in the cyberspace. 

Venerable critic-author John Thieme unveils a mini-epic poem, delving deep into many myths of creation, thus serving his own unique vision. 

Jay Stephens uncovers the Nimbin Mardi Grass for those interested in this unique rally, protest and celebration of a noble cause and lifestyle. 

Regular editor/contributor Rob Harle talks of the world of Leigh Arnold in his inimitable style. Being an accomplished artist Rob deconstructs another in a fluent way, unraveling meanings that only an expert can do.

Senior author Patricia Prime reviews prolific Jaydeep Sarangi.

Florence, Italy is visited by young Apara and caught on the film for posterity. The feature announces the arrival of a great talent.

Fiction.Poetry. Essays.
Interviews and reviews.

All are seamlessly presented to make it a rivetting read.

So, on any given hour, unwind and enjoy the May flavors with these great authors and artists from many parts of the world, ushered in by your favorite Setu!

Do write in, please.
Your words matter.
Send your stories, visuals, artwork, travelogue and feedback.
We would love to hear from you.

Editor,
Setu, English
Kalyan, Mumbai Metro Region, India

Discourses on Disorder: A Q&A with R. W. Watkins

Canadian poet R. W. Watkins began experimenting with the ghazal form in the mid to late 1990s. Subsequently, two of his earliest attempts became the only Canadian content in Agha Shahid Ali’s anthology of English-language ghazals, Ravishing DisUnities, in 2000. In 2003, he published the inaugural issue of Contemporary Ghazals—the world’s first English-language journal dedicated to the titular form of Middle Eastern and Indian poetry. An ‘Introductory Collection’ of poems from the first three issues of this groundbreaking publication was recently made available on Amazon.com. As well, Watkins released his first foray into novel-writing, The Rites of Summer, in January of this year. To mark the occasion, the following compilation of conversations and interview excerpts has been assembled. Watkins discusses the ghazal, alternative publishing, contemporary politics and other contentious topics with American webzine editor Michele McDannold; underground poet Pat Collins; Scottish poet/editor L. J. McDowall; his publishing assistant and romantic partner, Jacqueline Jones; and experimental novelist Bill Ectric. The earliest of these discourses dates from the fall of 2007.


Michele McDannold: What do you think is the single most troubling aspect in the writing world today?

I wouldn’t be able to narrow it down to merely one. As I see it, there are at least three or four very troubling aspects of equal detriment. Not the least of which is television’s abandoning of us. The middle medium—as I like to call it—started to give up on us poets—and writers in general—about two decades ago. As I was telling poet Bob Grumman [2 February 1941 – 2 April 2015] about a year ago, television still provides a little airtime for established authors roughly 60 or older, and will probably do so until those—[Norman] Mailer, [Margaret] Atwood, [Gore] Vidal, [Robert] Bly, etc.—are all dead and gone. [Note: Norman Mailer died just weeks after this interview, in November of 2007, and Gore Vidal passed away in the summer of 2012.] Then all the broadcasters will let out a collective “Wheewww! I’m glad that’s over!” and focus on even more serious dumbing-down and low culture instillation. They’ve been working on this for years, actually. Every time one hears informal banter between anchors during a supposedly formal news broadcast, or people referred to as ‘guys’ and ‘kids’ in the relating of a particular story, that’s this deculturalisation process in its most tangible and extreme strand of devolution. The anchors will eventually be dressing like Little Leaguers and hopscotch girls, and covering stories like ‘President What’s-His-Name’s Gnarly Trainers’, ‘Boogers and You’, ‘Dakota Gets Her First Thong’ and what-have-you. You’ll be seeing that down in the States in just a few years—if it’s not manifesting itself already. We’ll be seeing it here in Canada a little bit after that—first on CTV and Global, then the CBC. If there’s an electronic medium that’s going to help promote us, it will be the Internet aspect of the computer—not television. And the more coverage poets and other writers get online, the less airtime television will feel compelled to offer us—almost like a self-fulfilling prophecy that insures and perpetuates future ignorance.
           
Another very troubling aspect—especially from my Canadian perspective—would have to be the compromising of artistic output due to government funding. Here in Canada, even if one doesn't receive a grant from a provincial arts council or the almighty federal Canada Council for the Arts, he or she will still have to go through the government filter if they decide to send their manuscript out to a midsize or even large publishing house, due to the fact that the majority of these f**kers are regularly subsidised by both levels of government—often obscenely so, or so I’ve heard. Whatever the case, as I’ve said time and time again, the end result is books of poetry and fiction that resemble nothing as much as tourist brochures. “O blazing sacred wheatfields of Saskatchewan / You bow in praise of our late, great Prime Minister Trudeau and his virile loins / Then lean eastward / As if longing to grope the rugged shores of Nova Scotia and Newfoundland...”—you know, kitschy, geographically patriotic shit like that.
           
Of course, the flipside to this artless phenomenon is equally detrimental to literature today—namely, the under-40 or -45 crowd who write just pointless garbage without any real sociopolitical statement, even though they claim to be at odds with the establishment and are the cultural and philosophical descendents of the beats and angry young men—believe me, [Allen] Ginsberg or [Allan] Sillitoe they are not. These are the pathetic arseholes for whom message, structure and even talent are all optional. Here in Canada, this is the sort of rubbish that winds up in Broken Pencil magazine—a magazine funded by the Canada Council, I might add.
           
Whether it’s coming from the government-funded corn-meisters or the lazy ‘whatever’ pretenders, 99 percent of what gets published these days in Canadian journals is free verse—or narrative poetry, whatever that is—I’m not sure anymore; I think it’s when someone takes a shitty, pointless short story and arranges it on the page to resemble a bad poem—something like that. This in itself is not healthy either. Such publications would have us believe that no-one writes anything else—or knows how to; that there are a few people under 45 who know how to write a haiku, and that’s about it. If I could somehow coerce or blackmail enough of the Canadian journals into publishing all the different types of poetry I write, someone like myself—a Gen-X’er who can write in both Eastern and some Western closed forms, and concrete poetry, as well as free verse—would come across as an eye-opening exception nowadays, to say the least.

How would you describe the state of poetry on the Internet? Do you participate? Love it... Hate it?

Well, as large and midsize publishing houses have steered increasingly away from poetry, more and more poets—myself included—have begun self-publishing their own chapbook and full-length collections—sometimes completely on their own, more often as part of a collective. And these aren’t simply hacks who envision themselves as poets but in reality couldn’t get a two-line epigram published in the free space of an upstart sports or homemaking magazine; these are usually poets whose work has appeared quite regularly in some of the most important litzines and journals out there. So one can’t rightfully categorise such books as ‘vanity publishing’; the true vanity publishers, the self-styled poets, have moved online, as I’ve noted in an article I wrote for Contemporary Ghazals. All the free verse that’s even too rotten and pointless for the Broken Pencil-type publications, you can certainly find your share of that on the Internet nowadays.
           
However, if one can get past the horseshit, there is some good stuff to be found online. I like most of the stuff on your site, Outsider Writers, and Litkicks has some pretty neat stuff—although I can do without the childish user-names; that reminds me too much of silly hip-hop posturing or something. Also, Levi Asher has too much of a say in airing and editing comments, and they usually only feature their own in-house reviews and essays, which is a drag. I’ve had three or four poems broadcast on Litkicks—and I consider such presentations broadcasting, by the way, not publishing as such. And I have something coming up in the next issue of the new online version of the legendary Evergreen Review—I’m very proud of that. Plus I’ve had a couple of ghazals included in an ‘issue’ of Gene Doty’s The Ghazal Page. That’s a nice little webzine. Gene’s a great chap. He must be. He puts up with me.
           
Of course, if you’re going to be ‘publishing’ and promoting yourself as an author online, you have to go through the proper channels and target the right audience. One has to make sure he or she is appearing on the most fitting, professional and beneficial sites, otherwise it’s better to stay off the net and stick to the zines and journals exclusively. I mean, if you’re aiming for the Facebook crowd, forget it! No doubt there are a few sincere exceptions, but I have a feeling that most of those silly f**kers haven’t read a book or even a newspaper article since secondary school. Facebook is the most popular of these so-called ‘social networking’ sites because it requires the least amount of brains and literary skills to complete a profile. MySpace is probably the most reputable of the bunch, due in large part to all the ninnies migrating to Facebook! A lot of writers, artists and musicians have MySpace sites, including moi.
(Autumn, 2007)


Pat Collins: What was the initial reaction to Contemporary Ghazals back in 2003 when you published the first issue?

Disinterest. At least here in Canada. I spread the word through the various journals and organisations—like the League of Canadian Parrots, er, Poets—and stirred up zilch interest. The house publications of the writers’ organisations were more interested in reporting on social events, and functioned more like the society pages of old. “Susan Musgrave giggled girlishly as she read her new elegy for the clear-cut BC rainforests, and Michael Crummey looked absolutely radiant in a blue chiffon gown”—you know, rubbish like that. Never trust an organisation where everybody’s always smiling and laughing moronically in the photographs. At the end of the day, it’s the poets south of the border who made Contemporary Ghazals a worthwhile project. Ditto for my new journal, Eastern Structures. The talent and initiative is simply lacking up here.

But have things improved any over the years?

Well, there was a young Canadian lady who had nerve enough to step up to the plate and contribute a poem to Issue 6 [of Contemporary Ghazals]—whatever her foreknowledge and intentions. So that was a minor step in the right direction. But overall, there’s not much in the way of positive news to report. When I had a copy of the Contemporary Ghazals Anthology sent to some Ontarian named Michael Dennis for coverage on his blog, he didn’t even bother to review it. I guess he didn’t have the necessary qualifications! He did, however, review Rob Winger’s The Chimney Stone, which consists entirely of phony ghazals—i.e., free verse merely arranged in couplets. That tells me everything I need to know about Dennis’s literary standards and politics. It gets even ‘better’. When I emailed Winger a couple of years ago, inviting him to contribute some real ghazals to my journal, he never even bothered to get back in touch. That’s what I call a resounding silence of the negative variety. At least no-one can say that I haven’t made the effort.

Rob Winger published a condensed version of his Ph.D. thesis on the Canadian ghazal in Arc Poetry in 2009, and never made mention of you or your magazine. Why does Winger and his associates (editors, publishers, Carleton University) insist on such omissions and misrepresentation of the facts? Why the false history? Why the deception?

Canadian poets are quite adept at changing the rules in order to accommodate their own shortcomings in the talent department. This is certainly true in regards to a form like the ghazal. Such poets—and their cronies who run the state-funded journals and publishing houses—base their arrogance on ignorance, expediency and deception. Black is white and white is black. It’s a very generic left-wing way of doing things, bordering on the Orwellian. As you’ve probably guessed, they’re also not the most informed and up-to-date people you can meet. Many of these editors and publishers are the type that screams “Hippy!” when they get cut off at an intersection by someone with thick sideburns. Some of them are such anachronistic numpties that when they hear a term like ‘goth’ or ‘grunge’, they probably envision Elvis impersonators. Believe it or not, I once received feedback regarding a short story I’d entered in the Newfoundland & Labrador Arts and Letters Competition that stated, “Good fiction doesn’t contain adverbs.” I mean, bloody hell – you can’t make up stuff like this! As for the universities, Rob Winger’s silly thesis proves that a Ph.D. from Carleton University is worth just slightly less than a Bazooka Joe bubblegum comic in VG condition. In fact, given my background in essays for The Comics Decoder website, maybe Carleton would award me a doctorate for a thesis on Bazooka Joe.

Is there any vehicle in Canada for getting the truth out there nowadays, though?

None that I know of. The state-funded writers are publishing in the state-funded journals and magazines and appearing on the state-funded cultural programmes for the sake of other state-funded writers. They write the rubbish, they write about the rubbish, they publish the rubbish, and they read the rubbish—all with the blessings of the political powers that be. The various levels of government fund their tomfoolery with our tax dollars, thereby legitimising such drivel. It’s a closed circle, a bureaucracy that perpetuates itself and keeps the undermining elements—i.e., the truth—hidden and underground. Even most of the online rubbish run by Canadians is blatantly censorious. For example, when I posted a comment criticising some ignorant, amateurish piece about John Thompson and the Canadian ‘ghazal’ on the silly Lemon Hound blog in 2014, it was promptly removed by the creepy commies in charge. I remember writing, “An ant is what it is, a grasshopper is what it is, and the ‘ghazals’ of Lorna Crozier are a humbug.” I certainly still stand by that—the entire educated world does!
           
There is actually a bright side to all this negativity, however. As I said, the rubbish that government-funded phonies like Winger and his ilk churn out is intended primarily for Canadian eyes—specifically, other writers and academia. So, if it’s any consolation, virtually no-one from outside this country reads such malarky, and certainly no-one publishes it. It’s all about reassurance and saving face in a world where Canadian writers and artists are usually thirty years behind the eight ball. Things really haven’t changed much since F. R. Scott was writing satirical poems about the self-important Canadian authors of the 1930s and ’40s. A large percentage of them are still rather deficient in the talent department, and seeking solace in each other’s mediocrity is still a means of propping themselves up.

(Summer, 2016)


L. J. McDowall: After a long hiatus, you published the Contemporary Ghazals Anthology in 2015, but in the interim your comments on Asian-form poetry attracted a great deal of criticism from the Canadian poetry establishment. Would it be fair to say that you’ve ruffled a few feathers?

Actually, the anthology came out in 2014. I’m not sure if I’ve really ruffled any feathers here in Canada—I have south of the border, definitely—especially amongst the ‘mainstream’ haiku poets in recent years; but here in Canada... Well, the Canadian literary ‘establishment’—which is largely a self-appointed bunch of government-funded hacks who usually wind up teaching in the second-rate universities—like to respond to criticism with silence. I’m not sure if they mean to convey a message of You are beneath us, and therefore not worthy of a response, or if they merely lack the nerve and intellect to be fighters. Generally speaking, these people—especially the poets—are important to each other. As I’ve said on occasions, they seek solace in each other’s mediocrity, and mean very little to anyone beyond the Canadian borders. The only time anyone from amongst Canada’s general population even pays them a blind bit of notice is when one of them writes a volume of dubious verse about some dead hockey player from half a century ago. Seriously.

The Canadian establishment has been especially silent on your contributions to the development of the ghazal form, though. As I understand it, you were the only Canadian poet included in what’s regarded globally as the seminal anthology on English-language ghazals, Ravishing DisUnities, edited by the late and sorely missed [Agha] Shahid [Ali]. It would seem that your contribution to this has been ignored deliberately, a glaring omission—here I’m thinking of Dr Winger’s scholarship on the ghazal that failed to mention you at all. Do you think this omission is because you’re essentially a boondock poet, at the coal face in the wilds of Newfoundland, or because academic poets discount the work of poets outside the university settings?


Oh, it’s a combination of things, I think. As it’s been pointed out, someone who writes anatomically correct ghazals on the Canadian front is ‘a spanner in the works’, as they say. I was a sort of ‘reverse embarrassment’ to Rob Winger’s self-serving thesis and rubbish article close to a decade ago. It was convenient that I be ignored. I made them look incompetent. As I’ve said, twisting the rules and rewriting history in order to suit your ambitions is the left-wing Canadian way. It’s a fine bit of arse-covering, but it only works so far in this Internet era. This is something so many of these Canadian chumps seem to be forgetting. These people like Winger are in my age category or younger, yet they seem to be existing solely in a pre-web print universe. They seem to have no knowledge—or at least regard for—webzines, blogs, social media, e-books, modern print-on-demand services like CreateSpace and Lulu, etc. They naively underestimate their power. They can publish some self-serving article in some print magazine and manage to conjure up maybe 10,000 readers, tops. Meanwhile, 250,000 others are writing and reading articles and blog posts to the contrary online, and the poor buggers like Winger don’t even realise it! In this regard, people like Winger are definitely ignorant of the off-campus writers out in the ‘boonies’ and underestimate us to our advantage. 


It’s interesting what you say about both the Internet and the print-on-demand publishing platforms changing the game. I know several small literary presses taking advantage of the POD revolution—places like Indigo Dreams, for example, where a large number of very high-quality poets are published each year, made possible by the Lulu platforms. I think this means there’s probably an intersection between the new poetry world and the old one—the Internet-era presses can, and do, publish poets who have successfully published with more traditional presses. However, it is the Internet, as you say, that has changed the game for both types of exposure—for example, poets who are not able to access the hearts of literary London or Edinburgh in the UK are just as able to hold their own. If anything, I think the Internet has democratised poetry in terms of location. If you do live in the boonies, the Internet strips away the importance of location, but for those still mired in print and academia, the importance and perhaps the ability or willingness to take seriously literary artists who operate outside the traditional spheres appears to be a learning curve. Would you agree that this new online environment has given classical poetry a new lease on life?

Well, it’s given all forms of poetry and artistic expression a new lease on life, provided the people contributing to the blogs, e-zines, CreateSpace productions, etc. are truly capable as creators. Frankly, I think the ‘alternative’ literary world—i.e. the blogs, webzines, POD books—is now bigger than the ‘mainstream’ literary world. It’s beating the doors down, undermining the established order, and the academics and the ageing stars of yesteryear don’t want to admit it or deal with it. And when on occasion they try and join the newfangled system, they usually wind up looking opportunistic and silly. Margaret Atwood comes to mind.
           
I often compare it to the two different worlds that increasingly comprised the music biz of the mid to late 1970s and ’80s. You may not be old enough to remember, but it was truly a case of Us vs Them in those days. Let me demonstrate what I mean with a perfect example. In the late ’70s / early ’80s, there was a young lady from Akron, Ohio not that many years older then myself, by the name of Rachel Sweet. I remember Sweet making two albums for the punk/new-wave label of the day, Stiff Records, covering the likes of Isaac Hayes, Elvis Costello and The Velvet Underground, and then seemingly disappearing from the scene by 1981 or ’82—or so I thought. I was a grown man well into my twenties or early thirties before I was made aware that Rachel Sweet had gone on to record two albums on Columbia in the early ’80s, made videos, covered Pat Benatar’s ‘Shadows of the Night’, and scored a fair-sized hit dueting with Rex Smith (of all people!) on a cover of ‘Everlasting Love’! Well! Another myth shattered! I have since met people who were of the exact opposite stripe: they had no clue that Sweet had ever been involved with the ‘alternative’ Stiff scene and had been lumped in with the likes of Costello, Lene Lovich and Wreckless Eric. That’s how divided the mainstream and alternative markets were in those days.
           
Well, if I were to talk about the contemporary literary situation in historical rock-music terms, I would say it’s 1988 or ’89, and the major labels are finally running out of ‘viable’ bunk to sell. They’ve seen the indie-label sales figures, and are just becoming familiar with the Seattle, Manchester and Vancouver scenes. Warner and A&M have already signed REM, Jane’s Addiction and Soundgarden, and there are rumours that David Geffen is starting a new major label and wants Sonic Youth first and foremost. That’s about where we are in terms of the Western literary world in 2017.

(January, 2017)


Jacqueline Jones: So, when all is said and done, which issue of Contemporary Ghazals do you think was the best?

Well, there aren’t that many to choose from, but I’d have to go with No. 3. I mean, that issue was some eight years in the making, wasn’t it. It’s actually the ‘residue’ from two individual attempts at publishing an issue. Issue 3, as initially intended, was ready to go to press in 2008, when my computer crashed, wiping out a lot of my files—including most of the poems and stuff that comprised No. 3. There was even an interview with Gene Doty that I hadn’t yet transferred to disc. That disappeared into electronic thin air. So when I’d finally gotten over the disheartening experience and decided to reboot the mag—after a few years of devoting myself to Internet matters like Red Fez and The Comics Decoder—I found myself selecting replacement material for the lost items from a whole new supermarket, so to speak. Given the circumstances and the length of time that had passed, there were plenty of poems to work with. The results were quite satisfying. The first two issues set the wheels in motion, so to speak, and featured some very good work at a time when there was very little to select from—and before there was any Internet connexion, figuratively or literally on my part. Issue 4 was also quite good, if not a little too... pat in places. I had lost touch with poets like Marcyn Del Clements and Teresa M. Pfeifer by that time, as well. It’s actually most people’s favourite issue, judging from the feedback I’ve received. No. 5 was an interesting experiment—revisiting and revising some of the old ghazals—but I don’t think it lived up to its potential. Gene Melino came on board as No. 5 was being put together, and he would play an increasingly large role over the next year or so. By the time No. 6 was being pieced together, my attention was being drawn to other projects. I can’t decide whether No. 6 is a good issue or not. I mean, I like the packaging—the Bill West cover and art throughout—but other than Gene and John Philip Drury, I don’t recognise any of the names inside! It had become a whole other ball game by that time. Actually, most of Eastern Structures No. 1 had already been stitched together before CG No. 6 was even out. That’s a good indication of how my attention had shifted. It’s kind of fun to look back over the past fifteen years at this point, but I think Eastern Structures should be the main focus of my attention—our attention—from this time onward.

Are you still on good terms with Eugene Melino, by the way? He hasn’t been showing up in Eastern Structures, I notice.

Well, he hasn’t been submitting, now, has he! Ha-ha! Seriously, though, I get along well with Gene. I think he gave too much credence to those early free-verse ‘ghazal’ poets in that article he wrote for The Ghazal Page last year, but he’s a fine fellow overall. I was glad to see that excerpt from his Immortal novella included in Pattern Recognition.

How about the others? I noticed Steffen Horstmann mentioned you and Contemporary Ghazals in the notes and afterword to his Jalsagher book of ghazals.

Yes, it was very nice of him. Steffen’s a spot-on fella. I continue to get along well with the majority of poets and editors I’ve had close dealings with. For some reason, though, people tend to turn against me when they’re on their deathbeds, so to speak. I mean, Gene Doty wasn’t very obliging when I submitted a poem to The Ghazal Page as his health was failing. He blanked me with all kinds of arbitrary baloney about proper protocol and what-have-you. I’m not sure what was going through his head at that point. A few months after his death, I got in touch with a relative or two of his, requesting that they search through his computer files for the interview I’d been doing with him when my computer crashed in ’08. I wanted to finally publish it in CG #5, but nobody got back to me. Again, I’m not sure what the problem was. And then just last year Jane Reichhold decided to shit all over Eastern Structures before snuffing it over a cliff—or whatever actually happened to her. I’ve mentioned it [Reichhold’s death] to Jim Wilson and a couple others. It all sounds very murky to me—like something out of an old Steve Ditko suspense story for Charlton. How ironic that Eastern Structures was actually modelled after her Lynx to such a degree!

What about that fellow from Australia you tried bringing on board?

Oh, Paul Smith. Yeah, I was impressed with his many translations of the old masters—Ghalib, Hafez, Attar, etc., and so I thought he would be a useful addition to the magazine—especially when it came to supplying material for the ‘Classic Revisited’ section [of Contemporary Ghazals]. He sent me PDF files of some of his books—most of which are readily available from Amazon—but I was dismayed to discover that the prefaces and afterwords were full of typos, bad grammar, etc. So I offered my editorial assistance in cleaning things up for him—I mean, they really were a mess. At first he agreed, but after I pointed out a few too many mistakes for his liking, he got in a right huff and took his ball and went home. Along the way, I discovered that this fella doesn’t actually translate all these classic ghazals of antiquity, but rather adapts other people’s literal translations from the Arabic, Farsi, Urdu, etc. into the qafia/radif format—the same as what myself and a few others have been doing for the past fifteen to twenty years! Another myth shattered, alas.

Would I be right in assuming that a good portion of what appears on The Ghazal Page is material that has been rejected by Contemporary Ghazals or Eastern Structures?

Well, other than a handful of names, I can’t say I’ve really noticed. I do suggest to people who play fast ’n’ loose with the form that they instead submit such poems to said site, knowing that Gene and his heirs have always employed a less stringent set of criteria. What percentage of them actually do and are accepted, I can’t say with any degree of certainty.

Have those old friends of yours from high school and college days shown any interest in your literary output? I’m thinking of people like Kent Burt for example.

You mean the ‘artsier’ or more bohemian ones (or so they would have you believe)?

Yes.

Nah. Most of those are still too busy rowing over who was the best guitarist—Jimmy Page or Allen Collins. Ha-ha! In all seriousness, I lost touch with the majority of those fellas decades ago. A lot of them never made the proper transition into the ’90s. If you were watching Roseanne and listening to Guns ’n’ Roses in ’88, ’89, then there’s a good chance you got left behind. Some of them were complete phonies to begin with. Others are ‘missing in action’—or in their graves. Schizophrenia and related conditions did a number on several of them. A few of them are on my Facebook friends list. They’re harmless enough additions. As for Kent Burt specifically, I exchanged a few online messages with him several years ago, and he was talking all silly and ‘divaesque’—telling me how he never wanted to be a poet, and how he sees himself as a rock star or something. Whatever. He’s released a string of digital albums under the name ‘The Linger Effect’ over the years. We’re talking three- and four-minute jangly alternative pop pieces that sound nothing like one should expect from someone like Kent. Anyway, to cut to the chase, I stopped socialising for the most part about a decade and a half ago, and I haven’t taken phone calls in several years.

Yeah, you don’t even take phone calls from Robin Tilley any longer, and you two were once close enough to write a chapbook of experimental poems together.

Well, we still exchange peculiar presents by mail on occasions. I mean, I just recently posted him a bootleg CD of rare Leonard Cohen tracks and had a copy of The Rites of Summer sent to him, and he sent me a copy of Nick Cave’s latest disc. And he still leaves the occasional message on our phone.


Which I have to check and listen to because a certain someone couldn’t be bothered with such “advanced technology”....
           
So old friends and family on Facebook are obviously not a major market for your poetry and the new novel...

Like we were talking about a few weeks ago, social media is not really conducive to selling books, magazines, comics, etc. The Internet in general has produced a ‘freebie’ culture centring on a mentality of entitlement and misappropriation: I pay my connexion fee each month, ergo the online world owes me everything. Then again, I guess Twitter- and Facebook-generated sales figures are about as good as the people with whom a person connects and adds as ‘friends’. Most Canadian Facebook accounts are littered with beer-bellied numpties who blow all their money on fancy motor vehicles and oversized houses in order to compensate for their inconspicuous breasts and undersized penises. I’m not much of a Left-leaning sort of fellow, but I would love to impose a ‘culture tax’ on these low-minded buggers. So you don’t want to buy Canadian poetry, Canadian records, attend the symphony, visit Canadian art galleries, go to the pictures, etc.? Fine. No problem—but here’s a 20% culture tax on your annual income. Try not to get too drunk and knock over your $2,500 gas barbecue with your $20,000 snowmobile on your way to the ballot box.

(February, 2017)


Bill Ectric: Your novel, The Rites of Summer, is having the uncanny effect of growing on me days after I finished reading it. I keep returning to that image of the round metallic object with an electrical cord. At first, I felt a sci-fi vibe, but now it seems more like some arcane appliance I might find in my grandmother’s attic. The question is: Would you care to comment on that metal object?

Well, on a straight-ahead narrative level, the metallic ‘Simon’ functions as little more than what Hitchcock liked to call ‘the McGuffin’. I guess there are a few McGuffins in The Rites Of Summer, actually; but this bizarre appliance is the primary one in the Henry and Mrs. Williams chapters. I can actually remember dreaming of such an object during a fever when I was probably eleven or twelve. I woke up delirious, so I guess it would be considered more of a hallucination, really. Anyway, I decided to inject it into the Williams narrative like a big question mark.
           
There is a sort of sci-fi or slipstream vibe resonating throughout the entire book. The further the plot is removed from Dicky and his day-to-day antics, the more pronounced it is. The chapters dedicated to Dicky and his delinquent, eccentric pals are grounded in the realities of that era: booze, drugs, sex, comics, punk culture, pinball parlours, etc.—much of which is now extinct and remembered unfavourably by agenda pushers of both Left and Right persuasions. The Karyn / summer-camp chapters are one step removed from reality. There’s the Morse code signals, the dirt in Karyn’s trunk, the punctuation-only section, the ‘concrete’ binocular views, and—of course—the encoded Ouija board chapter. It may not be sci-fi or supernatural in nature, but something strange is definitely going on at that camp, and it’s presented very visually for the reader. By the time one gets up into the country with Mr. and Mrs. Williams, the plot is entering the twilight zone. It’s rather Lynchian in that sense, and I have to admit that Charles Burns’s comics had an influence on the book as a whole.
           
I can see where such inexplicable plot developments and ‘McGuffins’ would leave the book lingering in the back of people’s minds for some time after—provided they’re serious readers who took some degree of interest in the story to begin with. I can also see where the more visual elements—i.e., the binocular views, the punctuation passage, the Ouija board code—might have the potential to function on a more subliminal level, and such subliminal ‘embeds’ and symbols sometimes have a way of popping up in our dreams. So given all that, I can understand the book nagging at one’s consciousness for some while after reading—like two branches rubbing together above your bedroom roof as you drift off to sleep each night.

Is there any significance to the gravel in the trunk?

Well, at the literal level, the dirt in the trunk is nothing more than a nasty prank pulled by some snooty bunkmate in Karyn’s cabin at the summer camp. Keep in mind, however, that the trunk was purchased in Rumania—or Romania (I use both spellings in the novel), of which Transylvania was historically a region. So—without giving away too much—on a symbolic level, the girl is lugging about her coffin.

Is the text that looks like gibberish actually a code?

Yes, it’s actually a coded message—containing answers to all the mysteries of the universe! Seriously, though, it is an actual narrative; one that adds an extra dimension to the story. I think it’s rather post-modernist on at least one level. It’s by no means a difficult code to decipher, so to speak, but so far people have been reporting intimidation by it.

You seem to be quite interested in codes. Let’s talk about that.

Well, I was the boy at the junior-high level who could decipher the witch runes and what-have-you on the first two or three Ozzy Osbourne solo albums! Seriously. The message on the cover of the double live album, Speak Of The Devil, was particularly long and intimidating, but I cracked it in just a couple of hours, with no guide to Nordic runes to help me. Actually, I have a longstanding interest in mysteries, detection, conspiracies, alternate histories, etc. I think it was the result of coming out of a youth/pop culture that was immersed in Scooby-Doo, Clue Club, the Hardy Boys and Nancy Drew, etc. I mean, that stuff was everywhere in the ’60s and ’70s—children’s mystery novels published by Scholastic, Saturday-morning cartoons, Shaun Cassidy and Parker Stephenson dressed for the damned disco—you name it. Such entertainment made children curious and imaginative, but also skeptical to a large degree. In other words, we were all intrigued by the concept of ghosts, but hardly anyone actually believed in such stuff. It could all be explained away by science and a little detective work. Of course, all this changed after people like R. L. Stine and J. K. Rowling came along in the late ’80s or ’90s. Now eleven-year olds fall asleep at night fantasising about having sex with werewolves and vampires who have entered our dimension through mobile phones and laptop screens. Stein and Rowling paved the way for all this Twilight rubbish and the like. Such stuff makes the old tongue-in-cheek EC horror comics of the 1950s now look like Hemingway by comparison. The last youth shows to utilise intelligence in a positive light were the teen detective series, Les Intr├йpides and Shirley Holmes, back in the ’90s. If you’re masochistic enough to check out any of that rubbish that they run on YTV and Nickleodeon nowadays, you’ll soon detect an underlying message that is disturbingly commonplace in these shows: It’s cool to be an idiot and conform to the moronic masses, and to be intelligent and cultured is synonymous with being antisocial and/or sociopathic. Anyway, that desire to solve a mystery, to find and utilise the missing piece of the puzzle, shows up in my fiction to a large degree. You can find it in The Rites of Summer on various levels, and you can certainly find it in the (mostly unpublished) short stories that will comprise my fiction collection, Like a Crimson Gash, if I can ever manage to get it out. The Rites of Summer grew out of a short story that was intended for this forthcoming collection. When it got to be some forty to fifty pages long around 2011, I realised it was out of control and had to be re-imagined as a short novel.

Would you ever consider writing a graphic novel, teaming with an artist? Or are you also an artist?

I’ve been wanting to do some serious work in comics for years, if not decades. I’ve had an idea for a superhero series in the back of my head since the summer of ’95, and I also have notions for two graphic novels. The outline and some of the script for one of them has been committed to paper. Finding an artist who would take on such projects is the stumbling block. I’ve asked around, but there’ve been no definite takers. A young fellow named Gordon Lindholm, who does the Luna Lesser online strip—examples of which I’ve included on my Comics Decoder site—has expressed some interest in developing my idea for a superhero. But he’s from another generation and has a radically different perspective. And he has all sorts of stuff going on in his own young life. When you’re that age, you want to run with your own ideas first and foremost. Given his David Lynch influences, I think Rich Barrett would be the perfect artist for the partly developed graphic novel I mentioned; but he’s got his own Nathan Sorry series to contend with on top of his busy personal life.
           
The biggest problem with comics today is that most young artists feel that they don’t need a writer/scripter, that they can develop their own concepts and characters. Well, have you read some of the rubbish they tend to churn out? Unless you’re talking about someone like Dennis Hyer, believe me, Charles Schulz or Walt Kelly they are not! I used to do a bit of drawing and painting when I was younger—I was one of those who took all the art classes at the high-school level—but I don’t have the time or patience these days to try and develop or redevelop any such skills. I think the writers are actually going to come out on top in the long run, though, because various software and apps shall render the artist optional. All a person will need is a decent digital camera and a few ‘actors’. The writer will just plot out his story, gather a few friends together in the right locations and snap the photos, and then upload and convert to comic-style images. This has already been happening for some time, actually. The technology will simply get better and better. I can remember reading submissions for the Red Fez webzine, and a fellow sent in a story composed in this fashion which made us editors sit up and take notice then—and that was six or seven years ago or more. So a writer without an artist these days should probably be checking out technology, auditioning ‘actors’ and building props, rather than searching endlessly for uncooperative talent or trying to develop skills which he doesn’t have. The artist without ideas or literary skills is destined for extinction, frankly.

Do you think the moon and stars can affect people on earth?

Well, aren’t sun spots supposed to have an effect on menstrual cycles or something? Or is that the moon? I’ve always thought that Tippi Hedren’s cycle caused the birds to attack in that Hitchcock film. Either that or it was the incestuous impulses between Rod Taylor and his mother. Whatever the case, I based a short haiku sequence on it several years ago.

What about the fact that the moon affects the tides and we are mostly made of water?

Can’t say I’ve ever really thought about that. But I’m sure some of these modern-day werewolf enthusiasts would be all over such a concept. Jackie makes me watch The Walking Dead with her, by the way. That’s the show where no-one seems capable of talking above a whisper unless they’re beating someone’s head in with a modified baseball bat or burning someone alive. And people thought Twin Peaks and My So-Called Life were going to ruin a generation. Sweet Jesus.

That’s funny. My wife is a big fan of The Walking Dead. I like it okay, but not as much as her. It comes on before Columbo ends, so she watches it in the bedroom and I join her as soon as Columbo collars the murderer. Depending on the Columbo episode, sometimes I join her in bed and watch the entire Walking Dead episode. Gruesome shit.
           
You mentioned Crimson Gash. Is it “Crimson Gash” or “A Crimson Gash”? Did I get that right?

Like a Crimson Gash. A no-prize to those who can figure out where I stole that phrase from!

Did you ever hear that story from the 1960s—possibly an urban legend—about a crazed, gibbering hippy that the police picked up, and he was eating human knuckles? Or he had human knuckles in his pocket?

No, I don’t think I’ve heard that one. That was the sort of story Jim Morrison was fond of telling or concocting, according to some accounts. We tend to overlook the fact, but quite a few street legends and peculiar tales came out of the ‘swinging’ ’60s and ’70s. Quite a few focussed on Jim Morrison, come to think of it. I love all the bizarre stories, theories and shady people that have come out of the woodwork in the wake of his death—or whatever actually happened to him. And the L.A. Woman album—or should I say AWOL Man album—is a real gem of a clue source, with its Morrison-understated album cover, anagrams, and references to changelings and bathrooms. Priceless! A true contender for Greatest American Rock Album of All Time.
           
Actually, I’ve always seen the New York City of the 1950s, ’60s and ’70s as a really dark, morbid place. I mean, there’s the artsy weirdness and treachery of the early Beat movement... the Warhol suicide paintings... the high mortality rate amongst the hangers-on at his [Warhol’s] Factory... the bleakness of those Velvet Underground albums... those scenes from Midnight Cowboy—like the strung-out mother with the rubber rat in the cafe... the brothel scenes from Taxi Driver.... It all seemed very disturbing taken as a whole. So much so, that when I started hearing as a teenager about how AIDS had supposedly gotten its North American start in San Francisco in the mid to late ’70s, I remember thinking, Hmm... This doesn’t sound right. My suspicions have since been confirmed by well-documented revelations about strains of the virus showing up in New York between the late ’50s and late ’60s. That’s probably just the tip of the iceberg. I have an uncanny feeling that various strains have been introduced and reintroduced outside of Africa going back to the 1930s and ’40s, possibly. And via all sorts of routes—maybe even some nefarious ones.

So who are your influences?

Ah... the must-ask question—and a difficult one for me, given the fact that there are so many different ‘strands’ to my output. Starting way back in high school, the early free verse was influenced primarily by a combination of Dylan Thomas, beat poets like [Allen] Ginsberg and [Lawrence] Ferlinghetti, and rock poets like Jim Morrison and Lou Reed. You can find a good cross section of that early stuff in Direct Lines to Hell (2015). By the mid ’90s, my attention had definitely shifted to haiku and tanka, owing mainly to my reading the likes of Raymond Roseliep, Virgil Hutton and Gary Hotham in various anthologies. That gradual move towards Japanese poetry roughly coincided with my university years. Speaking of which, Tom Dawe was a good professor to have in uni because he was quite proficient in both free verse and haiku.
           
By the late ’90s, I’d discovered the ghazal—the real ghazal—courtesy of an article by Agha Shahid Ali and a few examples in Lynx by people like Hemant Kulkarni and William Dennis. I think the ghazal form in itself was a major influence, and younger—mostly Gen-X—poets like Steffen Horstmann, Denver Butson, Daniel Hales and Yours Truly have all developed our own distinct styles over the past couple of decades because there weren’t any real and proper precedents to imitate in the English language in the first place. Prior to us, there were merely a handful of ‘big-name’ dabblers and a few poets who were starting to experiment with the form in middle age. As for the classic Indian and Middle Eastern poets who had been translated into English, the vast majority of the translators made very little or no attempt to preserve the traditional attributes of the form. Of the free-verse ‘ghazal’ poets—Adrienne Rich, John Thompson, Phyllis Webb—I won’t even speak, except to say that their influence on a generation of na├пve Canadian poets was particularly detrimental. So, like I said, we younger poets were for the most part left to ‘reverse engineer’ a few inchoate English-language examples and semi-correct translations, and carve out our own unique styles and themes from there onward.
           
As for the fiction, well, my influences are all over the place. If I could narrow it down to a particular genre or two, though, I’d have to say I’ve been influenced primarily by suspense, mystery and some ‘slipstream’, I suppose. But my influences come from a range of mediums—not just old Laird Koenig novels, Shirley Jackson stories and children’s mysteries, as most people would probably suspect. I mean, David Lynch’s films and television series, Steve Ditko and Nicola Cuti horror stories for 1970s Charlton Comics, Twilight Zone and Tales of The Unexpected, early Amazing Spider-Man—all have had some impact on my fiction. In the case of The Rites of Summer, stuff like Joan Lindsey’s Picnic at Hanging Rock, Charles Burns’s Big Baby comics, and even a Schulz/Peanuts story arc came into the mix—along with semi-biographical sketches of people I once knew, of course. Even the idea of having two chapters unfold at once on the same page, in two separate columns, finds its origin in underground film and rock music, believe it or not.

Have you read Pale Fire by Nabokov? How about Henry James’s short story, ‘The Author of Beltraffio’?

I’ve never read anything by Henry James or Vladimir Nabokov in my life, believe it or not—not even Lolita. Some of the true bohemian spirits out there will probably be a little shocked and disillusioned to hear this.

So, how would the lives of youth in the time of The Rites of Summer—35 to 40 years ago—compare to young people’s lives today?

Well, you were allowed to grow up back then, weren’t you. I think that would be the bottom line. In fact, it was encouraged back then. Those were still the days when a boy was often taught how to smoke by his grandfather or an Uncle Clem. There were no helmets, no mandatory seat belts, no fast-food-free cafeterias, etc.—and no computerised gidgets! It was a recipe for freedom and socialising. Young people still managed to get outdoors in those days. They even had their own centres of culture and social organisation in the form of pool halls and pinball parlours—you know, so-called ‘teen hang-outs’. Those places have been as good as outlawed in recent decades. On the surface, such restrictivism is supposed to be about keeping young people healthy, happy and safe. But it doesn’t hurt the middle-aged powers-that-be to see childhood prolonged and the younger generations kept docile and out of politics. Such people may no longer study much history, but they haven’t forgotten the turmoil of the Vietnam era—or even the Gulf War / Grunge era, for that matter. The goal is to keep youth disorganised, childish and dependent, while simultaneously cutting down on the number of expensive, foolish civil suits that come before the courts because ‘Li’l Jimmy’ fell off his skateboard or ‘Li’l Janis’ got kissed by that boy with a crush. A youth culture has been allowed to develop that degrades intelligence, sophistication, maturity and guts. You know what I mean. Let me tell you a little story... One day five years ago, my then-girlfriend and I were browsing in a local Walmart—just passing some time, ‘casing the joint’. Suddenly we came upon the book section, and lo and behold, there was a polite-looking young lady of maybe twelve or thirteen standing there, wearing a decent blouse and tweed blazer, seriously reading a thick hardcover novel or biography. Thirty-five to forty years ago, she would have gone unnoticed—such a girl would have been virtually ubiquitous. But in 2012? She was a freak of friggin’ nature! All of us Gen X’ers and baby boomers were staring at her as if she were an holographic unicorn, while a few girls in her own age category who were passing by rolled their eyes and turned up their noses at ‘the weirdo’! Now that is a perfect example of how times have changed—for the worse. I can barely stand to look at some of these wretched little mutations today in their teens and twenties. I mean, I’m seeing what should be young men, in their mid twenties, and they haven’t learnt how to dress themselves or use a comb yet. With their baseball caps, baggy trousers and short unkempt hair, they remind me of nine-year-old Little Leaguers from half a century ago. It’s pathetic. And the parents have become so jaded and self-obsessed themselves, they just stand back and let it happen. We already have a generation out there who’s been raised on a bizarre combination of Oprah Winfrey, Harry Potter, Focus On The Family, and Mothers Against Drunk Driving! It’s only going to get worse, and it’s right up the government’s alley. They’re laughing! What happened to the days when every fourteen-year-old fella wanted to hitch-hike across Canada or worm his way into Rachel Sweet’s dressing room, and every fourteen-year-old girl wanted to shack up with Marc Bolan or have Leonard Cohen’s baby?

Turning to politics, it amazes me that sometimes I see old clips of Reagan, and he actually says things I only wish Donald Trump would say.

Well, there’s no question about it, Trump is doing wonders for the historical reputations of Reagan, Johnson, and even Nixon and Bush Jr.

I actually believe the reason Trump won is, so many people voted for a third-party candidate, knowing they wouldn’t win, but at least their conscience would be clear.

That’s quite possible.

What do you think about third-party candidates?

Well, I’m accustomed to third-, fourth- and fifth-party candidates here in Canada.... I think a major part of the problem revolves around the fact that there are no longer any centrist parties on either side of the border. All the parties move further and further to the Left or Right as time goes on. In the meantime, I’d wager that as much as 80% of the population see themselves as centrist and therefore no longer truly relate—thus the lower and lower voter turnouts in each election.

In the US, it’s getting more and more like one of those fake “reality” shows.

I agree with [Canadian media commentator] Rex Murphy: I think a certain large segment of the population no longer knows the difference between fantasy and reality (and ‘reality’).

You’ve been writing ghazals, which is a form of Muslim poetry, for a long time now. You must have some thoughts on the ongoing fear of Islam in the West.

The fear has been exacerbated in the wake of the Syrian ‘troubles’, the subsequent mass emigrations, and the coming of Donald Trump, certainly. But how much of it is really fear of Islamic extremists—which we have had with us always—and how much of it is actually plain ol’-fashioned bigotry looking for a fresh excuse to manifest itself? Judging from some of the online commentary I’ve been seeing, especially on Facebook and Twitter, a good portion of it falls under the latter category. Most of these poor bastards who do all the squawking have never really talked to and broke bread with a Muslim in their lives. They’re mostly disenfranchised white males, secular-Christian and working-class by birth, who lack purpose and direction, and envision themselves as the last of a dying breed—which, in all honesty, they may very well be. In other words, their bigotry has more to do with their perceived small penises, mid-life crises, and ‘no-smoking’ signs in pubs than what it does fear of fifth columns or terrorism of any sort.
           
Another factor is the result of hardcore multiculturalism: the immigrants who have been making countries like Canada their home over the past few decades have not been encouraged to blend into a ‘melting pot’ like those from previous eras. As a result, we now have ethnic enclaves that are increasingly miniature countries within cities. Well, just think about it: sexy Punjabi girls from traditional Sikh families, for example, having to live at home and obey curfews well into their twenties—this presents an obstruction entailing resentment on the part of young men that harkens back to the male insecurities which history has come to associate with the witch hunts of the Middle Ages.
           
As for the Trump phenomenon, I think President Donald is the ‘Boaty McBoatface’ of heads of state. You may recall just a year or so ago, over in the UK, they held a poll to name some fancy new submarine [ultimately named the RRS Sir David Attenborough], and the cynical and infantile general public went with ‘Boaty McBoatface’. Well, Donald Trump is the Boaty McBoatface of American presidents. The whole Trump phenomenon is the political equivalent of the boat-naming fiasco. Frankly, I think voting for Donald Trump is like voting for some bastard son of Walt Disney who has been abandoned by Gypsies and raised by dingoes. His getting elected is indicative of the immature state of mind in a devolving contemporary Western world.

(March, 2017)




Ghazal

Faiz Ahmed Faiz

Adapted from Agha Shahid Ali’s translation by R. W. Watkins


Your sorrow’s seeking someone among those men who once frequented these roads—
someone whose blood, for you, would be lost.
But those who once were willing to expire for you in an instant have gone;
now forever, no doubt, to ye lost.

The night in all its darkness did await with me until the dawn for you;
admitting loss, Loved One, it then left.
My soothers grimaced at my retained tears and left disappointed as well,
thinking my grief—held back—sorely lost.

There’s neither chance of a night impassioned nor way to intimate distress;
there’s nothing left; just now, all is gone.
There’s no room for fuss or space allowed for advice in this era of ours—
the wild heart’s rights, Despot, to thee lost.

It was me whose shirt was dyed and designed with blood disengaged on the streets;
accusations, like inks, browned the spots.
I labelled such stains a style so-anew and went to my lover’s abode,
where one could then, in crowds, find me lost.

No longer is there a place where be found that frenzy of passion so wild;
wedlock’s fabrics, whilst raw, are not worn.
With what will you fill that rope? And who’s asked that a lovers’ gallows you raise?
Those once charged proud, Hangman, have we lost.


(Included in the recently published Contemporary Ghazals: An Introductory Collection; available from Amazon.com)



Ghazal: Grows Cold

Norma Jenckes


We build fires of driftwood and yet the night grows cold.
We watch the waves for hours but that sight grows cold.

Bonfire, fire works, World Trade Center, atom bomb –
anything humanity can ignite grows cold.

Oh, how my face burned when friends laughed
at love marks, what’s left when even his bite grows cold?

The poet “warms his hands before the fire of life”
and departs when something bright grows cold.

When I was young I thought that I could fix
the world’s wrongs, but being right grows cold.

Baby’s first step, your first kiss, mother's breast,
only liars declare that delight grows cold.

Do you recall how Dante found a circle in hell
where even pride and envy and spite grows cold?

Hector and Achilles, David and Goliath,
Beowulf and Grendel: the hottest fight grows cold.

The Earth will be a cinder and dead suns spiral
away, the cosmos darkens when starlight grows cold.

Oh Norma, such bad company you keep. They say
we fight the good fight, but violence’s blight, grows cold.


(To be included in the forthcoming third issue of Eastern Structures)